2024年中考英语旅行游记类作文写作

旅行游记类作文 【写作指导】 体裁：记叙文（narration） 时态：现在完成时+一般过去时 人称：第一人称 段落布局：三段论 第一段：brief/simple introduction of the trip, 对旅行的简短介绍，交代旅行的时间，人物，地点，出行方式等事实性信息（factual information),同时表达自己对这次旅行的感受or评价。本段的时态为一般过去时。 第二段：对旅行的经历进行具体展开，详细地和读者介绍你在这个地方做了哪些事情：看了什么，玩了什么，吃了什么。这是写作的明线，与此同时，你仍然需要在这个部分适时地表达对这些事物的感受/评价，也就是说，你在看到、玩到、吃到这些东西的时候有什么感受，对这些事物有无评价。这是写作的暗线。在这部分，写作的结构建议设置为“总分式”，叙事顺序可以是时间顺序（具体时间：On the first day, on the second day, ...or 宽泛: At first, then, next, at last）都可以。与此同时，如果想要文章内容变得丰满而富有文采，记住我们的扩句方法：加入细节描述+修辞手法。 第三段：首尾呼应，再次对这次的旅行进行抒发感想。 【写作对比分析】基础版 My travel experiences in Qingdao Last summer vacation, my family and I went to Qingdao by train. It was really an impressive trip.(这是一个让人印象深刻的旅程） We have done a lot of things there. On the first day, we got up at 5:30 a.m. in order to see the sun-rising. When we arrived at the seaside, there were a lot of people.The sea was as blue as the sky. I also picked up many colorful shells(五颜六色的贝壳）with my little sister. Next, we have also eaten many local sea food there, such as fish, prawn(英[prɔ：n,对虾）, and so on. They tasted really delicious. After that, we went to the old street. It is a good place to go. Because You can buy different kinds of souvenirs and clothes here. At last,we enjoyed a traditional food in the local restaurant. In a word, Qingdao is a modern city. If I got a chance, I hope to come here again, it is such a beautiful and interesting place. [186words] 【升华版】 My travel experiences in Qingdao As an ancient Chinese saying goes， “He who travels far knows much”. In my opinion，modern life is impossible without traveling. As for me, I have ever been to many beautiful and interesting places before, such as Beijing,Nanjing，Hangzhou，Suzhou and so on. But Qingdao is the most fantastic place that I have ever visited. Last summer vacation, my family and I went there by train. It was really an impressive trip. On the first day, we got up at 5:30 a.m. in order to see the sun-rising. When we arrived at the seaside, it was full of pe