2023届山西省高三一模作文推荐信+足球少年闯祸 课件

2013山西一模作文讲评 应用文：推荐信-外国友人-中文歌曲 读后续写：人与社会-人际关系（责任与担当）-绿茵少年闯祸 审题 文体 推荐信 人称 第一人称为主 语言风格 非正式 内容要点 1.消息+推荐；2.歌曲的理由（歌词/旋律+歌曲内涵）；3.你的祝愿 重点搭配：recommend sth. to sb. 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Daniel想参加网上举办的“外国人唱中文歌”才艺大赛，发邮件希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲（歌名可用汉语拼音拼写）。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐曲目；2.推荐理由；3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1. 【消息+推荐】要审题！推荐推荐推荐… Delighted to know (that) you are taking part in the online Chinese Song Competition, I am writing to recommend one of my favorite songs to you. 误区：I feel honored to recommend… Para.2 【歌曲的理由（歌词/旋律+歌曲内涵）】 注意不仅仅是介绍歌曲！！另外：选择比较严肃的歌曲参加才艺比赛不太合适。陈述理由要与比赛有一些关系(…help you better express your feelings)。 The name of the song is Dan Yuan Ren Chang Jiu, which is adapted from a classic piece of Song poetry②. With its heartfelt lyrics（歌词） and beautiful melody（旋律）, the song expresses deep emotions and touches people‘s hearts③. Besides, with a slow pace（节奏） and clear pronunciation（发音）, the song is not too challenging for non-native Chinese speakers to learn④. （至少介绍两个理由。未运用逻辑词，不关注段内结构，12分以下） Para3 【你的祝愿】 I'm looking forward to hearing about your experience in the competition. Wish you good luck. 歌曲好听 the song sounds musical 留下好印象leave a good impression on the audience 人与社会（人际关系——陌生人之间的责任与担当——对接X2U1成年） Lionel, Fandi and Iskandar often got together to play football. They dreamt of one day growing up to be professional footballers. The empty field beside the block of neighbourhood was where they would meet for their football sessions. One sunny afternoon, they were at the field as usual. They were in the thick of处在激烈阶段 their game when Fandi aimed his foot at the ball and gave a forceful kick. He himself was surprised by his strength. The ball flew past the goalposts breaking into a glass window of the house behind. The boys were too shocked for words惊讶得说不出话来. They were half expecting the annoyed home owner, Madam Leong, to storm out气冲冲出来 through the front door and give them a good tongue criticizing. They knew she was an ill-tempered old lady. Actually, she had