Unit 1 Section 5 Writing a Sci⁃fi Short Story&单元考点 美文全记-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版）

Section 5　Writing a Sci⁃fi Short Story 题型解读 谋篇思路 科幻故事是一种开放式作文,一般给出一段材料,要求我们发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容,运用逻辑推理的方法,沿着材料的纵横方向延伸,给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程。为了吸引读者,要求故事的语言要生动、夸张、富于虚幻性 首段:故事的开始 主体段落:故事发展的过程 尾段:故事的结尾 满分佳句 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.With science and technology developing, our lives have changed a lot in the 21st century. 随着科技的发展,21世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。 2.It is hard to predict what exactly the future will be like. 很难预测未来会是什么样子。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.The ring suddenly began to speak, which made the brave young man very amazed. 戒指突然开始说话了,这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异。 2.No one liked to talk to Wilbur, a weak pig, except a spider named Charlotte, who treated Wilbur as her good friend. 除了蜘蛛夏洛特,没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪威尔伯说话,夏洛特把威尔伯当作她的好朋友。 3.In 2146, we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds. 在2146年,我们在空中飞翔,用意识传递信息。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life. 他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫,过上了幸福的生活。 2.When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we can know more about the outer space. 当科学家们对宇宙进行进一步的研究时,总有一天,我们可以更多地了解外太空。 3.The amazing film will certainly appeal to people of all ages. 这部令人惊叹的影片一定会吸引各个年龄阶段的人。 写作规范 　　某英文报社正在举行英文科幻故事大赛,请你根据所给出的故事的开头(不计入总词数),续写一篇80词左右的科幻小故事参赛。 Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring suddenly said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.” ... 　　注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要点结构 首段 故事的开始 记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时 主体段落 故事发展的过程 尾段 故事的结尾 第二步:斟词酌句　靓化表达 1.年轻人毫不犹豫地戴上了这枚戒指,他吃惊地发现自己消失了,其他人都看不见他。 The young man didn􀆳t hesitate to put the ring on his finger, surprisingly discovering that he disappeared, invisible to other people.  2.他感到更有自信了,向前面的城堡走去。 He felt more confident and headed for the castle ahead.  3.一靠近城堡,他就进入了城堡。 On approaching the castle, he entered the castle.  4.最终他找到了那个女孩,她被女巫施了魔咒。 Event