Unit 3 Section Ⅴ Writing——描写运动场景-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高一英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Section Ⅴ　Writing——描写运动场景 Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W he was ahead of the others after a short time were very excited were cheering for them that were present at the race were moved by his spirit Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Tom ran so fast that he was ahead of the others after a short time. All the viewers were very excited，cheering for them. All the viewers present at the race were moved by his spirit. Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W 谢谢观看！ Unit 3 Faster，higher，stronger 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W [文体感知] 本单元的写作目标是“描写一个运动场景”。写此类文章时，必须把下列要素介绍清楚： [增分佳句] 1．Our school held a sports meeting... 2．Of the runners，Tom was the...one 3．He ran so fast that the other runners... 4．Suddenly，he fell down...and... 5．Someone walked to him and... 6．Finally he stood up and went on running... 7．The people present were all... 8．All of us should be more strong­minded... [典题示例] 根据下面的提示，描述某一个运动时刻。 1．上周日学校在操场上举行了跑步比赛；在所有的跑步运动员中，汤姆是跑得最快的一个； 2．他在拼命奔跑，其他运动员在拼命追赶； 3．突然，汤姆摔倒了，左腿受伤了；一些同学过去帮助他； 4．过了一会儿，汤姆站起来，继续跑； 5．在场的人都被他的精神感动了。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last Sunday our school held a running race on the playground.___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 第一步　学会审题谋篇 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．汤姆跑得很快，一会就领先于其他选手了。 Tom ran very fast and ______________________________________． 2．所有的观众都很兴奋，在为他们加油。 All the viewers _________________ and they __________________． 3．在比赛现场的所有观众都被他的精神感动了。 All the viewers ___________________________________________． 第三步　创设亮点(包括词汇美或句式美) 4．用so...that...句型改写句1 ________________________________________________________ 5．用非谓语动词改写句2 _______________________________________________ 6．用形容词短语作定语改写句3 ________________________________________________________ 第四步　衔接成篇得满分 Last Sunday our school held a running race on the playground. Tom ran so fast that he was ahead of the others after a short time.He was trying his best to run and the other runners were trying to keep up with him.And all the viewers were very excited，cheering for them.Suddenly，Tom fell down and his left leg was badly injured.Some students ran to him and took care of him.One student advised him to give up the race.However，after some time，Tom struggled to stand up and went on running.All the viewers present at the race were moved by his spirit. I learned a lot from him.From now on，I will be a determined person and never give up. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike来信和你讨论爱好的体育运动。请你给他写封回信，介绍下你自己最喜欢的运动项目及理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike， _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Mike， I am writing to tell you about my favorite sport. Of al sports，I like table tennis best.The reason why I like it very much is that it is our national sports as well as of great benefit to us.Playing table tennis can build up our bodies，keep up healthy and train our brains，What's more，it can help us to learn to cooperate with each other.In a word，I like it very much.Though I can't play it well，I still try my best to practice it. I am also looking forward to learning about your favorite sport. Yours， Li Hua $$