Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing——记述一次经历-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高一英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 2 Onwards and upwards Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Section Ⅴ　Writing——记述一次经历 Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W will not forget the incident that happened got lost in the heavy rain made me very nervous know what to do Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W she took me to my home I will not forget the incident happening when I was about six years old. Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W I got lost in the heavy rain，which made me very nervous. I stood there，not knowing what to do. Seeing me standing in the rain crying，she took me to my home. Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W 谢谢观看！ Unit 2 Onwards and upwards 英 语 选择性必修第一册 W [文体感知] 关于记述一次经历是记述这次经历的过程以及结果(或影响)的记叙文。注意事项： (1)理清与活动相关的时间、地点、人物、活动的过程以及影响等。 (2)找准时态与人称，理清写作顺序，将文章的要素合理结合，使其完整。 [增分佳句] 1．Several days ago，I attended a party... 2．Last Sunday，my friends and I went to... 3．It was very hard for me... 4．To my surprise，it is so interesting... 5．This experience made me become more... 6．From then on，I didn't want to do... 7．In a word，I will not... 8．I got an important lesson from this experience... [典题示例] 假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示描述自己的一次经历。 1．大约六岁时，在野外独自玩耍时迷路了；天突然下起了大雨，你非常紧张，不知道该怎么办。这时一位女士从你身边走过。她询问了你的情况，然后把你送回了家。 2．你的父母非常感激那位女士，你从此也明白一个道理：做人要乐于助人，帮助别人会使自己更快乐。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　学会审题谋篇 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．我忘不了发生在我六岁左右的一件事情。 I __________________________________________ when I was about six years old. 2．我在大雨中迷路了，这让我非常紧张。 I __________________________ and it ____________________． 3．我站在那里，不知道做什么。 I stood there and I didn't _______________． 4．看到我站在雨里哭，她把我送回了家。 When she saw me standing in the rain crying，___________________． 第三步　创设亮点(包括词汇美或句式美) 5．用非谓语动词改写句1 _________________________________________________________ 6．用定语从句改写句2 __________________________________________________ 7．用非谓语动词改写句3 ____________________________________ 8．用非谓语动词改写句4 _______________________________________________________ 第四步　衔接成篇得满分 I will not forget the incident happening when I was about six years old.One day，I was playing alone outdoors.Suddenly，it began to rain heavily.I got lost in the heavy rain，which made me very nervous.I stood there，not knowing what to do.Just then a woman walked past.Seeing me standing in the rain crying，she took me to my home.When we arrived home，we were both wet.My parents were very grateful and asked her to stay to have dinner，but she left in a hurry. From then on，I decided to try my best to help those in need.I'm sure that I will be happier if I help others. 假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。 要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头部分已写好。 I am an 18­year­old middle school student.______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 参考范文 I am an 18­year­old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: Why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly，I put all the books，newspapers and other things in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept the floors.I found it hard to clean the floor.At this very moment，my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all these.My mother gave me a big hug and I could see joy and thanks in her eyes. Although I was tired，I never felt so happy. $$