Unit 1-5 作文分析与讲解 2023-2024学年牛津上海版英语六年级上册

期中作文U1-U5复习背诵： U1: My family I have a happy family and today I want to tell you something about my family. There are three people in my family. They are my parents and me. My parents love me very much and they always take care of me. My mother is an English teacher. She is very kind to her students and her students like her very much. My father is a policeman. I think my father is cool because he can make our city a safe place. My parents often take me to Renmin Park to have fun. I love my parents, my parents love me. We love each other. I feel very happy to live in my family. U2: My good friends I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy. We are in the same class. We like to be together. She is always kind and friendly to others. She is never naughty and she never tells lies .We always walk to school together and share our lunch together. She studies hard. She is never late for school. Lucy is good at English and I’m good at Chinese, so she usually helps me with my English and I help her with her Chinese. We usually watch a film and go to the park together at weekends. Besides, she always shares her food with me. I like her and she likes me . We like each other. We want to be good friends forever. U3: Plan a day out My friend and I are going to visit the Central Park. We are going to get there by underground line 7. We are going to fly kites together. We are also going to have a barbecue and take some photos there. We are going to get there at 9 o’clock in the morning and come back at 4 o’clock in the afternoon. The ticket will cost us 20 yuan for each person. The underground ticket is 5 yuan. I will also spend about 30 yuan on snacks and soft drinks. I believe we will have fun there. What would I like to be? 写作思路分析 1. 本话题为叙事类作文。 2. 小作文主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 如何写好本话题类作文 一、开篇点题提分句型 1. Different people have different dreams. / Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Some would like to be teachers. And others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a / an