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【2021级成都二诊•书面表达】 你校英文报正举行以“The Power of Smile”为题的征文比赛，请结合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。 The Power of Smile 审题 体裁：短文（夹叙夹议文）——微笑的力量 时态：一般过去时/一般现在时 人称：第一人称/第三人称 谋篇布局 结构：1. 事例→观点；2. 观点→事例；3. 观点→事例→观点 写作难点： 1. smile一词是指微笑这个表情动作还是引申含义？（eg.面对困难、挫折等不轻易放弃，乐观勇敢面对?) 2. power是一种什么力量？（不能泛泛而谈，要具体化） 3. 写亲身经历时叙述部分容易写得平淡乏味怎么突破？（添加关于心理活动、表情动作等描述） 4. 写感悟时要合情合理、恰如其分，不要言过其实（微笑不是万能的）。 重难点突破 1. 写亲身经历时可以选哪些场景？如何切入？ A. 社交场合——结识新朋友、参加社交活动等（微笑代表友好、开放，能缓解尴尬、紧张情绪等，给对方留下好的印象）； B. 人际关系——与家人或朋友产生矛盾冲突、心情低落时（微笑代表宽容、理解等，起到减少矛盾冲突，缓解人际冲突等作用） C. 身处逆境、遭遇挫折时——比赛或考试失利等；（微笑代表了安慰、鼓励，告诉我们要坚强勇敢面对困难、挫折，对未来充满希望等） D. 成长或成功时——通过努力成绩取得进步或认真准备比赛取得成功（微笑代表了认可、喜悦、自豪、充满信心等） E. 自己失意却帮助他人被感谢时等（微笑代表了喜悦、感激之情，能帮助我们改善心情、振作精神） A possible version There are times when a small action can make a big difference. Smile is just one of them and my recent experience has deepened my understanding of its magical power. The Power of Smile There are times when a gesture as simple as a smile can do wonders, lighting up someone in the darkness and even healing the soul. Overwhelmed by the stress from my poor academic performance, I was on the verge of breaking down. Noticing my frustration, Shelly, my best friend came to offer a few words of comfort but I was in such low spirits that I blurted out some sharp words and she ran away weeping. Regrettably, I was too ashamed to apologize and I couldn’t feel worse, which threw me into a world of darkness. The moment I saw her approaching the next day, I lowered my head immediately, trying to shun her/avoid her deliberately. However, she stopped me and gave me a hug. When I looked up, I met a smiling face, as sweet as flowers in the spring /as gentle as a summer breeze. At that moment, all my anxiety and depression melted away. When words fail, smile speaks. Useful expressions 1. boost one’s mood/cheer sb. up 2. establish/forge a close relationship/rapport/ties with sb. 与某人建立亲密的关系 (①connect with sb./bond with sb. ②build/create/forge