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【校园生活】
初中三年即将结束, 回顾丰富多彩的校园生活,哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题,根据以下提示写一篇短文, 向校刊投稿。内容包括:1.介绍活动过程;2.分享个人感受。注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
The Most Impressive School Activity
Time flies and sees the end of my school life. The gold old memories of the past three years flash back to my mind. Among these activities, the military training impressed me most.
The first summer vacation witnessed our freshmen’s military training which ran for a week. We exposed ourselves to a great variety of activities, such as queue trainings, a march with a distance of 15 km, an emergency evacuation drill and so on. We lost ourselves in the joy of growth in sweat. Even more impressive was our performance with real guns.
With a mix of bitterness and happiness, the unforgettable experience touched me a lot, and taught me that only by saying no to giving up can I not fail but to succeed.
时光飞逝,眼见中学生活接近尾声,三年的美好时光仍然历历在目。让我印象最深刻的活动还是暑期的军训活动。
我们在步入初的第一个暑期参加了为期一周的军训活动。我们进行了队列训练、15公里拉练、消防安全演练等等,在汗水中感受成长的快乐。更让人印象深刻的是在汇报表演时我们还端着真枪进行了实战表演。
这次难忘的经历有苦、有乐,更有感动,同时也让我懂得了做任何事情,只要永不言弃必定成功。
亮点:
Time sees the end of my high school life运用无灵主语结构;
... flash back to my mind历历在目;
The first summer vacation witnessed ...运用无灵主语结构;
lost ourselves in ...运用分词短语作状语结构,意为“沉浸式体验...”;
Even more impressive was ...运用完全倒装结构;
with a mix of集...于一体,既...又...;
only by ... can I ...运用only+介宾短语置于句首产生部分倒装结构;
say no to sth拒绝某事;
cannot fail but to do sth=must do sth一定做某事。
【2】毕业之后,你想为母校做些什么呢?请你写一篇演讲稿发表在校园官网上。内容包括:
1:种植树木
2:捐赠书籍
...
参考词汇:graduate(毕业)donate(捐赠)
注意:词数80-100;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I am very honored to give you a speech about what I would like to do for our school after graduation.
For one thing, I'll plant some trees to make our school a more comfortable place to live and study in, which helps create an enjoyable scenery. For another, donating some books for our school would be a great choice, because the textbooks will not be replaced in the following ye