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47. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I grew up in a poor family with six brothers, three sisters, my father and mother. We had little money and few goods, but plenty of love and attention. I was happy and energetic. I understood that no matter how poor a person was, he could still afford a dream.【theme?】
My dream was athletics田径. By the time I was sixteen, I could throw a ninety-mile-per-hour fastball and hit anything moving on the football field. And I was so lucky that my high-school coach was Ollie Jarvis, who not only believed in me, but often told me “Dream is priceless”.【theme?】 However, when I was about to get off the ground使(某事物)开始运作或进行成功, one particular incident事件,事故 happened, which almost ruined my long-held长期以来的 dream.
STEP1 读懂故事,理清5W1H1E
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It was the summer holiday in senior two and a friend recommended me for a summer job. I was offered $ 12.25 per hour. Compared with the average $3.5, that was a big sum. I was so excited, because this meant a chance for money in my pocket, certainly money for a new bike and new clothes, and the start of savings for a house for my mother. The prospect(前景)of the job was inviting诱人的,吸引人的, and I wanted to jump at the opportunity迅速逮住机会.
Then I realized I would have to give up summer baseball training to handle the work schedule. I didn't dare to tell my coach, I thought of the advice my mother often gave me when I lacked courage, "If you make your bed, you have to lie in it." I decided to talk to my coach in person亲自. After all, my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was worth facing his disappointment to me.
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I Study the given story
Task 1 Summarize how the given story developed.
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Ending
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Story Mountain
1.Though born in a poor family,my dream was athletics.
2. I did well in sports. And my coach often told me “Dream is priceless”.
3. Facing the inviting summer job, I dreamed of making money but had to give up th