内容正文:
职教高考作文
专题模板(一)
我去了________(某地)在_______(时候)和_______(谁一起)。
首句:
写作主题
去某个地方旅游的经历
人称:第一人称 我
时态:一般过去时
中间:
根据时间顺序来写,
第一天做了什么,第二天做了什么。
第一天
On the first day,
第二天
The next day,
我去了_______.
我吃了_______.它是_______. (美味的/辣的/甜的…)
我买了______ (礼物) 给________ (我的朋友家人等).
天气晴朗。我去了_______.
我看了_______.它是_______(美丽的/令人激动的/巨大的 等)
我参观了_______. 在那里, 我看到了_______(写几个具体看到的东西)
结尾:
虽然我很累,但是我很开心。我还想再去_____一次。
首句:
写作主题
去某个地方旅游的经历
人称:第一人称 我
时态:一般过去时
中间:
根据时间顺序来写,
第一天做了什么,第二天做了什么。
结尾:
I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents.
The next day, I went to the Great Wall. It is on the top of the mountains.
I ate Beijing Duck. It was delicious.
I also bought some gifts for my friends.
On the first day, it was sunny. I went to Tian’anmen Square(天安门).
I watched the flag-raising ceremony(升旗仪式). It is very exciting.
I visited the Summer Palace(颐和园). There I saw a beautiful lake and many old buildings(一个漂亮的湖和很多旧的建筑物).
Although I was very tired, I was very happy. I want to visit Beijing again.
下面把整篇文章合在一起:注意 在恰当的地方加上连接词,使文章连贯
I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents. On the first day, it was sunny. I went to Tian’anmen Square(天安门). I watched the flag-raising ceremony. It is very exciting. After that(在那之后) I visited the Summer Palace(颐和园). There I saw a beautiful lake and many old buildings(一个漂亮的湖和很多旧的建筑物). The next day, I went to the Great Wall. It is on the top of the mountains. Then (然后)I ate Beijing Duck. It was delicious. I also bought some gifts for my friends. Although(虽然) I was very tired, I was very happy. I want to visit Beijing again.
注意:黑色部分是文章主干结构,蓝色部分是要根据具体题目替换掉的信息内容,红色部分是关键的连接词,以后会慢慢分享更多的连接词。
写作主题
去某个地方旅游的经历
人称:第一人称 我
时态:一般过去时
首段:
写作主题
健康生活
人称:根据题目定
写我的习惯就是第一人称 我
写别人的习惯,就是第三人称
时态:一般现在时
中间:
结尾:
结构:总-分-总
本篇范文以Tom为例子,介绍他的课余活动(生活习惯)。
他起得_____, 睡得______. 他(是否)熬夜。
他吃_____作为 _____(早饭/午饭/晚饭)
他。他从不吃______.
他(是否)运动。
Tom 是我的_____. 他有着健康/不健康的的习惯。我来给讲一些他的习惯吧。
总结,好习惯有利于健康。/坏习惯对健康有害,我们应该努力养成健康的习惯。
首段:
写作主题
例文(一)Tom 有好习惯
中间:
结尾:
Tom is my friend. He has many good habits. Let me tell you something