内容正文:
职教高考作文
专题模板(三)
主题一
作文主题:
世界知识
语言功能:
谈论地理与自然
可能的写作主题:
谈论保护动物
首段:
1 :写作主题
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
题目分析:要求写关于保护自然资源珍惜动物的作文,要能够介绍 一种动物的基本情况,最后上升到保护动物保护自然。
中间:
结尾:
介绍这个动物的特点
我们一起采取行动来保护它们吧!
谈论保护动物
这种动物处于危险之中,为什么?如何保护它们?
写作结构:
体型(大小长宽重);居住地;吃什么;有什么特别之处
注意:不同的动物不需要介绍太详细,大概写出基本特点就行。
1 :写作主题
谈论保护动物
保护动物句型提示:
Many wild animals are in danger.
We should try our best to protect them.
I think people should / shouldn’t …
People have killed … for…
One of the main reasons is that
The number of … is getting smaller and smaller.
长宽高重的词句:
It is 100 meters long.
It is 100 centimeters wide.
it is 100 meters tall.
it weighs 100 kilograms.
1:写作主题
谈论保护动物(保护鲸鱼为例)
首段:
中间:
结尾:
介绍这个动物的特点
我们一起采取行动来保护它们吧!
这种动物处于危险之中,为什么?如何保护它们?
鲸是大型动物。它们居住在海里,吃鱼和其他海洋生物。一个有趣的事实是鲸能高高的跳出海面。
现如今,许多种鲸都处于危险中,因为人类抓它们为了它们的肉、脂肪和鲸油,并且用他们的部分躯体来做蜡烛和肥皂。此外,人类污染了水源,这使鲸没有干净的生存环境。
保护鲸很重要。首先,我们要制定规则关于鲸鱼保护。第二,我们不应该往海洋仍垃圾。第三,我认为人们应该更多的了解鲸。
Whales live in the deep sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water.
However, nowadays some kinds of whales are in great danger because humans catch them for meat, fat and oil, and use whale parts to make candles and soap. In addition, people pollute the water, so they don’t have clean living conditions anymore.
It’s important to protect whales. First, we should make rules on whale protection. Second, we shouldn’t put rubbish into the sea. Third, I think people should learn more about whales.
Let’s take actions now to protect them!
下面把整篇文章合在一起:注意 在恰当的地方加上连接词,使文章连贯
Whales live in the deep sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water.
However, nowadays some kinds of whales are in great danger,because humans catch them for meat, fat and oil, and use whale parts to make candles and soap. In addition, people pollute the water, so they don’t have clean living conditions anymore.
It’s important to protect whales. First, we should make rules on whale protection. S