读后续写课件-2024届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写 Speaker：Tang 三个原则 原文一致性原则 正能量原则 曲折性原则 四个步骤 通读全文，理清脉络 细读首句，构思框架 增加细节，展开续写 修改润色，整洁誊写 七个“不 1、不增加人物 2、不添加旁支情节 3、不用过多对话 4、不用负能量结局 5、不偏离原文 6、不在文末设置悬念 7、不违背逻辑常理 一、情节构思 宏观：第一段首句与第二段首句定第一段内容 第二段句首与正能量结局定第二段内容 微观：三个构思模板 action response 原则 conflict solution 原则 negative positive 原则 words step- 继，后或前夫（妻）所生 vacation 度假 put up 搭起，建造，张贴 backpack 背包 appeared 出现 tent 帐篷 redwood trees 红杉树 edge 边缘 campground 露营地 Model essay “No,”I said quietly,“stay near me and don't talk". I looked for the mother bear but couldn't find her. I stepped backward slowly. The young bear kept an eye on us but didn't call out for its mother, who I knew had to be close by. After what seemed like forever, the young bear jumped off the rock and ran away. I finally started breathing again. I turned back to Christina and saw fear filled her eyes.“It's OK."" I took her hand again.“Stick with me, and you will be fine.” Model essay Once we got to the redwood trees, Christina forgot all about the young bear and became happy. She ran to spread her arms around a big tree.“Give me your hand, Sean!" she called. Holding hands with outstretched arms, we couldn't reach around even one side of the tree trunks. I told Christina some facts about the redwood trees. She laughed as I ran after her around the stand of big redwood trees. Maybe this camping trip wasn't going to be bad. action response 原则 某个角色做出行动，引起另一个角色的反应 After what seemed like forever, the young bear jumped off the rock and ran away. I finally started breathing again. conflict solution 原则 抓住故事中心矛盾，合理构思 抓住中心矛盾是构思情节的关键 1. 角色之间的矛盾 2.角色与环境的矛盾 3.角色与自己内心的矛盾 conflict solution 原则 I turned back to Christina and saw fear filled her eyes.“It's OK." I took her hand again.“Stick with me, and you will be fine.” “Give me your hand, Sean!" she called. Holding hands with outstretched arms, we couldn't reach around even one side of the tree t