内容正文:
Unit 6 Enjoying Cycling
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(2023下·福建龙岩·八年级校联考期中)“五一”劳动节就要来了,你打算和好朋友去上海旅游。请根据表格提示内容,写一篇短文介绍此次旅游计划。
地点/时长
上海/三天
交通工具
飞机
旅行活动
第一天
迪士尼(Disneyland),博物馆,拍照……
第二天
东方明珠(Oriental Pearl Tower), 夜景
第三天
购物,吃美食……
期待
……
作文要求:1.词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
I’m very excited because May Day is coming. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
I’m very excited because May Day is coming. I’m going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my good friends. We will go there by plane. On the first day of our trip, we are going to visit the Disneyland. I’d like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. We also plan to visit the museum. On the second day, we will visit the Oriental Pearl Tower. At night, we can take a ship to travel around the city and enjoy the beautiful night view. On the third day, we decide to do some shopping. There are many kinds of delicious food in Shanghai, we can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can’t wait to go there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据表格内容介绍旅游计划,可适当发挥,注意不要忘记表达自己的期待。
[写作步骤]
第一步,通过表达“‘五一’劳动节就要来了”引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍自己的旅行计划;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①by plane乘飞机
②take some photos拍一些照片
③many kinds of许多种
④can’t wait to do sth迫不及待想做某事
[高分句型]
①we can take a ship to travel around the city and enjoy the beautiful night view.(and连接并列句)
②I think we will have fun in Shanghai.(think后跟宾语从句)
③There are many kinds of delicious food in Shanghai, we can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.(there be句型)
2.(2023下·福建龙岩·八年级校联考