Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版）

Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文 1．某英文网站正在开展以“我和家长一起锻炼”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，锻炼的时间和地点，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。 写作要点： 1. What sports do you and your parent(s) often do together? 2. When and where do you and your parent(s) exercise? 3. What benefits have you got from doing so? 要求： 1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级的名称； 3.词数 80 左右。 A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文： A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. So my parents and I often exercise together. We run together around the neighborhood every morning on weekdays. I play basketball with my father on the weekend. Sometimes my parents and I go swimming together in the swimming pool in the evening. Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. Our family is becoming happier and happier. Exercise makes us healthier. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据提示，介绍和父母经常做的锻炼； 第二步，根据提示，介绍锻炼的时间和地点； 第三步，介绍锻炼的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①on weekdays在工作日 ②go swimming去游泳 [高分句型] ①Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. (and表并列) ②Our family is becoming happier and happier. (比较级+and+比较级) 2．书面表达 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jill给你发来电子邮件，说她最近总是头疼，看过医生但是并未好转。请你根据以下提示，给她回复邮件。 提示：1.描述Jill的病情；2.分析病因；3.给出建议：保证充足的睡眠并做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条) 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jill, ______________________________________________________________________________________