Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版）

Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文

 

1．某英文网站正在开展以“我和家长一起锻炼”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，锻炼的时间和地点，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。

写作要点：

1. What sports do you and your parent(s) often do together?

2. When and where do you and your parent(s) exercise?

3. What benefits have you got from doing so?

要求：

1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级的名称；

3.词数 80 左右。

A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy.

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例文：

A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. So my parents and I often exercise together. We run together around the neighborhood every morning on weekdays. I play basketball with my father on the weekend. Sometimes my parents and I go swimming together in the swimming pool in the evening.

Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. Our family is becoming happier and happier. Exercise makes us healthier.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，根据提示，介绍和父母经常做的锻炼；

第二步，根据提示，介绍锻炼的时间和地点；

第三步，介绍锻炼的好处。

[亮点词汇]

①on weekdays在工作日

②go swimming去游泳

[高分句型]

①Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. (and表并列)

②Our family is becoming happier and happier. (比较级+and+比较级)

 

2．书面表达

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jill给你发来电子邮件，说她最近总是头疼，看过医生但是并未好转。请你根据以下提示，给她回复邮件。

提示：1.描述Jill的病情；2.分析病因；3.给出建议：保证充足的睡眠并做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条)

要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jill,

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Hope you will be better soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Jill,

I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days. You said you went to the doctor, but you didn’t feel better. From what you told me, I think it is because you’re too tired.

Here is my advice. First, you should get enough sleep every day. And you should do sports. Second, you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third, try putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed.

Hope you will be better soon.

Yours,

【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题。回复电子邮件时，作者第一句I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days.开门见山，对于听说经常头疼的消息表示抱歉。然后把出现的情况原因说明一下。描述一下：看医生，但是感觉不好。接着给出几条建议：首先，保证睡眠充足；其次多吃水果和蔬菜，尽量少吃肉。再者，睡觉前用热水泡脚。最后祝福对方早点好起来。

【点睛】电子邮件是书信的一种，对于对方的不好事情，先表明感觉难过。给对方提建议时，要有条理：先重后轻，依次讲明。最后送上祝愿早日康复。

 

3．由于学习生活紧张，现在许多学生饮食随便、不爱运动、不讲卫生，对身体有很大危害，假如你是学校的一名校医，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇简短的发言稿，给同学们提出一些建议和忠告。

注意：

1.词数不少于60；

2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.书面表达写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。

How to Keep Healthy

Hello, everyone!

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