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Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
Period 5 Reading for Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
What is the basic structure of a letter?
Dear Editor,
Yours truly,/Sincerely,
signature
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
body
Complimentary close 信尾敬语
Salutation 称呼
To whom
who
Reading for structures
2
Divide each letter into four parts and try to match the main ideas below to each part.
identify problems
consider what to do
describe what he / she has done to change
give the results
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
Problem-solution pattern
Problem
Problem
Decision
Decision
Action(s)
Action(s)
Result(s)
Result(s)
Reading for structures
Part 2 -Writing:建议信
letter of proposal
概念:根据对方有关问题,委婉礼貌提出针对性建议,并让对方接受的信件。
注意:用语礼貌,条理清晰,建议具可操作性。
要点:1. 明确写信目的。(purpose)
2. 针对性提出建议。(proposals)三条为宜
3. 希望对方采纳建议并盼回复。(hope)
开头:
.I am glad to receive your letter and it is my pleasure to give you some advice on...
2.Having known that you have some trouble in... I am writing to share some advice with you.
3.Thanks for your trusting and now I am honored to offer you some suggestions on...here.
主体:
建议一 First of all, what you need to do sth is ...
建议二 Additionally, if I were you, I would do B.
建议三 What’s more, I suggest you should do C.
.I think you are supposed to...
2.It is intelligent of you/a great idea to ...
3.You’d better/You may as well ...
4.If I were you, I would...
5. It would be beneficial if ...
结尾:
希望对方采纳:
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful/beneficial.
2.I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration/account.
3.I would be more than pleased to see ...
建议信模板
Dear XX,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble with...Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to.... My suggestions are as follows.
To begin with, it is a great idea to.