课作作业二十一 写作综合提分练5-【成功方案】2024年高考英语艺术生文化课总复习课时作业(Word)

课时作业二十一　写作综合提分练5 　　　　　　　　　　　 (2023·安徽合肥·模拟预测)假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括： 1．告知喜讯； 2．回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear_David， Full of joy, I can't wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school. My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale would have been dampened. Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best. Yours， Li_Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。 【详解】 1．词汇积累 令人激动的：exciting→thrilling 感激：gratitude→appreciation 初稿： draft→sketch 完成：complete→accomplish 2．句式拓展 同义句 原句：With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. 拓展句：When the draft was completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式) [高分句型2]With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate