内容正文:
课时作业二十二 写作综合提分练6
(2023·湖南郴州·三模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的成绩和努力;
3.期待与他交流学习心得。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Kevin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear_Kevin,
Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
Just as the saying goes, you reap what you sow. It's your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning! Interested in Chinese culture, you have long been devoted to Calligraphy, learning from masters and keeping practicing every day. How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improved!
Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours_sincerely,
Li_Hua
【语篇解读】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩,要求考生写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
相当、非常:pretty→quite
表达:express→convey
促成:contribute to→lead to
极佳的、非常好的:splendid→unexceptionable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:The fact that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students makes me quite excited, which is also the reason why I am writing this letter to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]It's your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning!(运用了强调句式)
[高分句型2]How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improv