读后续写之动作描写技巧 课件 -2024届高三英语作文专项

action 读后续写之 -by leon Teaching Aims： by studying the examples,we can help students learn the action pattern. by practicing exercise ,we try to help students put the skills into use correctly. look at the paragraphy and think how it is written (3.8周练Passage B) Rushing, he lowered his shoulder and crashed into the bear. But it only seized Buddy tightly. Benham’s heart jumped. He shouted and threw a stone at the bear. Nothing. He found out his can of hair spray(喷雾). He tried firing it immediately at the bear. A bright red cloud enveloped it, and the bear dropped the dog and ran off into the woods. 读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。 How to make your writing vivid and attractive? 最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言 A C T ? A之句式① S+ V1.and V2. 老师表扬了我们。 The teacher paised us. Combine a chain of actions together nodded with satisfaction thumbed up at us Divide the action into several steps 他掏钱给乞丐。He pulled out money to the beggar. reached into the pocket pulled out a handful of change gave it to the poor beggar A之句式② S+ v1., v2. and v3. Combine a chain of actions together Divide the action into several steps A之句式② S+V1.,V2.and V3. Follow time order 他拥抱父母。He hugged his parents. stood up hugged his parents smiled Divide the action into several steps Combine a chain of actions together He stood up, hugged his parents and smiled. 2.歌手唱歌(the singer sang.) 3.我匆忙上学。(I hurried to the school.) 1.父亲做蛋炒饭。(He made fried rice） I put on my coat hurriedly, grabbed my bag and rushed to school this morning. The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. He took out eggs from the fridge, cracked them into a bowl, and whisked them with a fork to help the sisters to make fried rice. Exercise C之句式 ① S+v., doing and doing 凸显同一对象同时发生不同的动作 女孩静坐 。The girl sat under the sunset The girl sat under the sunset read the newspaper listened to music The girl sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listen