Unit12 Innovation Writing Workshop课件 2023-2024学年高中英语选择性必修第四册

How to write an open topic composition - how to write about a person Teaching aims 1.Master the structure of this kind of writing 2.Write an open topic composition 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因 注意:1)词数100左右; 2)题目和首句已为你写好... . 2020全国一卷 Read The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.As for me,my father is the person I respect most.Born in a small city,my father is a doctor who loves his work and patients . His devotion to his work appeals to(attracts) me.when the corvid-19 spread in our country,he conceled his holiday and returned(went back) to his work in hospital.From day to night,he worked very hard,achieved a lot in his work,and respected by all his colleages(workmates) and the patients. After work, he would also spare some time to share some positive events about his work with my family. what is more, his encouragement means a lot to me. when I come across problems in my study ,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely and wisely. In my mind,my father is the person who deserves my respect. comment 书面表达评分标准 1— 完全完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点。(要点齐全) 2—,正确使用时态人称, 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。( 准确 多样) 3— 尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇;具备较强的语言运 用能力(高级) 4— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。(顺畅) 5— 完全达到预期的写作目的。(结构完整) Think 1.人称 (person) : Mainly the third person 2.时态 (tense): present tense/the past tense 3.标题(title) Small box big difference 4. 结构 (structure) Para. 1: describe the basic information of the person. Para. 2 : his or her experiences and achievements Para. 3: comments and influences Let’s think about how to write a composition about the description of a person. Think If you introduce a person, which aspects will you talk about? If you introduce a person’s birth and education, you can use such phrases: If you want to describe somebody’s quality or character, you can use the following words: If you describe a person’s influence, you can use such phrases: identity age look education experience quality achiev