Module3 Unit 5 Writing（2）课件-2023-2024学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

U5 Writing（2） 写作讲评 Get ready: 作文积累本，红笔，试卷 Learning goals 1. 通过小组合作学习，解决写作中的困惑并学习同组成员的写作亮点。 2. 了解本次写作中的错误并规避错误。 3. 学习推荐纪录片的理由拓写方法，通过举例和说明原因使要点更加清晰。 4. 讲评剩余学评练习错题。 Personal task: 2mins 1. 请查看老师对作文的评改，思考你在这篇写作中遇到的困惑与疑难之处。 2. 请找出你作文的亮点与组员分享，并说明你这么写的原因是什么。 Group sharing: 4mins Share you problems in writing and your shining point! Tip: Take down the wonderful phrases and sentences from the sharing of your group members. Mistakes 1. many different kinds of animals→____________ 2. 《Animal World》→____________ 3. protect the endanger animal→___________ 4. It lets me reflect ourselves that we should keep a good relationship with animals. →___________________________________ animals Animal World protect the endangered animals It lets me reflect myself that I should keep a good relationship with animals. Reason 2拓写 1. learn about habits 2. learn about animals quiz?? 3. Second, there are many valuable animals or far away from me that I can’t see in China. So it can broaden my horizons.(智扬) Great beginning 1. In this program, there are many animals and they play with each other. Some animal groups live together, the other animals live on their own. I think it is so amazing. Why I like it so much? There are several reasons.(刘林煜) 2. In my view, Animal World is an excellent documentary that is worth recommending. There are tons of reasons why I recommend it to you.(黄唯思) Body part! 1. I think watching this program can relax myself. We can see many animals’ lovely actions.(拓写是纪录片里的什么东西可以让我们放松)（梓心） 2. It can broaden my horizons and make me learn more about different kinds of animals. We can learn about many rare animals which we can’t see in our daily lives.(拓写了解到哪些动物的知识)（部分改编，泽鸣） 3. The documentary shows us the decreasing number of valuable species(补充说明在纪录片里看到了什么). It reflects the significance of protecting animals all over the world. Meanwhile, it can help us raise our awareness of protecting the animals. （部分改编，浩铭） 4. Finally, I can watch this interesting TV program with my family m