Unit10单元话题写作-描述理想中的学校练习课件 2023-2024学年冀教版英语九年级全册

单元话题写作 ——描述理想中的学校 　　你校将组织一次与澳大利亚交换生的交流活动,主题为"My Dream High School"。请根据表格中所给的提示词,用英语写一篇发言稿,描述你理想中的高中。　 　　 Campus(校园) Teachers & classmates In class After class large; beautiful... kind; friendly... free to choose subjects; a lot of practice... clubs and sports; a little homework... 人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时 　　要求:1.词数80—100; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Ladies and gentlemen, I'd like to share my dream high school with you.  That's all. Thanks for your attention. 【谋篇布局】 第一段:开篇点题,表明写作目的 ①I would like to share my dream high school with you. ②The following are some ideas about my dream high school. ③My ideas about my dream high school are as follows. 第二段:详细介绍理想高中的情况 ①The moment you enter this school, you will see... ②Teachers here are kind like our parents. ③Classmates get along well with each other. ④We can... and do whatever ... we like. ⑤All of these can make our life... and ... 【谋篇布局】 第三段:询问观众对理想高中的看法 ①These are my ideas.What about yours? ②What do you think of my dream high school? 第四段:总结全文,对观众表示感谢 That's all. Thanks for your attention. 【谋篇布局】 巧衔接 ①使用the moment,what's more,after等词使文章条理清晰。 ②使用when, after等引导的状语从句来增加文章亮点。 【句子升格】 1.When in class we are free to choose subjects. We are interested in these subjects and are given a lot of time to practice.(用定语从句将两个句子合并)   2. We shouldn't play too much computer games. We should join different clubs and do whatever sports we like. (用instead of 升格)   【范文赏读】 Ladies and gentlemen,  I'd like to share my dream high school with you. The moment you enter this school, you will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there.  In this school, we live like a big family. Teachers here are kind like our parents, and classmates get along well with each other. What's more, when in class we are free to choose subjects that we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice. After class, instead of doing much homework, we can join different kinds of clubs and do