读后续写之细化情节 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项

Learning aims： Para1: There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. __________________________________________________________________________ Before you write A Four-legged Guardian Angel 1. The theme： 2. Major characters： Minor characters： 3. Settings: time： place： 4. Main idea: friendship I, Brigitte--the dog Forrest--my son, the doctor April at my home Brigitte, the dog which came to my family on Christmas Eve and I intended to give up for lack of money, came to my son’s rescue when he was trapped in the pool at our house. How did I feel at the scene? How did the dog save my son? What did we do after the rescue? Building Structure Para1: There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. _______________ I was nervous. The dog pulled my son to the edge of the pool. We sent my son to the hospital. Detail the plots 1. How did I feel at the scene? ① 使用动作描写，细化紧张的情绪。 I saw my son was struggling in the pool, my heart pounded fiercely and my palm sweated. pound fiercely; palm sweat; struggle in the pool I was nervous. ② 使用独立主格结构优化句①的动作描写。 I saw my son was struggling in the pool, my heart pounding fiercely and my palm sweating. ③ 使用现在分词作状语、作宾补以及用so... that结果状语从句细化句①，体现紧张情绪。 Seeing my son struggling in the pool, I was so nervous that I could feel my palm sweating and my heart pounding fiercely. Detail the plots seeing...; so nervous....that，feel...doing 2. How did the dog save my son? ① Brigitte 努力靠近（get close to）Forrest并且成功的抓住了（grasp)他的衣服, 把他带到水池边上 （bring...back to）。(用-ing作状语） Detail the plots Translation: The dog pulled my son to the edge of the pool. Brigitte was trying her best to get close to Forrest and succeeded in grasping F