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假如你是小华,学校英语社团下周将要组织中国传统文化体验活动。 你打算邀请外交Jim 参加。 请你用个英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍中国的春节
提示词语:make dumplings; set off fireworks; have dinner together
提示问题:What do you often do during Spring Festival?
Why do you have this kind of activity?
写作四步走
1. 审题 确定人称和时态
读懂写作要点
2. 提纲 黄金三段式:总---分----总
3. 成文 内容填充: 升级词汇、句式
4. 检查 1. 语法,拼写检查
2. 书写规范
make dumplings
set off fireworks
watch Spring Festival gala
paste spring couplets
visit relatives
visit temple fair
审题
人称和时态 第一人称
一般现在时/一将
写作要点 介绍中国春节
活动
提纲(打草稿)
黄
金
三
段
式 Part1 总 点明中心
Part 2 分 介绍活动(3个)
Part 3 总 表达希望
Paragraph 1: 点明中心(1-2句话)
Paragraph 3:希望(1-3句话)
activity1
activity2
activity3
开头---点明中心
在中国有很多的传统节日,我接下来要为你介绍中国重要的节日---春节。
We have lots of traditional festivals in China.
There be 句型
There are lots of traditional festivals in China.
I would like to introduce the most important festival---Spring Festival to you.
make dumplings
have dinner together
在除夕之夜,我们会包饺子, 之后家庭成员齐聚一堂共进晚餐。
On the eve of the festival
We will make dumplings and get together to have dinner.
正文---介绍活动
在午夜12点的时候,我们会放烟花,来欢迎新年。
At midnight
We will set off fireworks to welcome New Year.
set off fireworks
正文---介绍活动
meet people and visit relatives
在初一,我们会串门,孩子们会获得红包
On the first day of Chinese New Year. People will get up early to meet people and children will get red pocket from relatives.
正文---介绍活动
On the eve of the festival,We will make dumplings and get together to have dinner. At midnight,We will set off fireworks to welcome New Year. On the first day of Chinese New Year. People will get up early to meet people and children will get red pocket from relatives.
时间线顺序
总而言之,春节对于每一个中国人来说都很重要,我希望你能明年我和一起过春节。
All in all, Spring Festival is very important for every Chinese. I hope that you can enjoy the Spring Festival with me next year.
结尾---总结
all in all
in a word
in short
全部文章
We have lots of traditional festivals in China. There are lots of traditional festivals in China. I would like to introduce the most important festival---Spring Festiv