Unit2GreatPeople单元话题写作 描述自己敬佩的人 练习课件- 2023-2024学年冀教版九年级英语全册

单元话题写作 ——描述自己敬佩的人 　　请以"The Person I Admire Most"为题,写一篇80词左右的英文短文,内容包括以下要点: 　　1.你最敬佩的人以及他/她的基本信息; 2.你为什么敬佩他/她;　 3.他/她在你心中的地位以及对你的影响。 人称:第一人称 时态:一般现在时 人称:第三人称　 时态:一般过去时 　The Person I Admire Most   【谋篇布局】 第一段:开门见山,点明自己所敬佩的人 ① My father is my hero. ②I admire my father most. ③The person I admire most is... 第二段:描述人物形象 ①He is tall and handsome. ②He is neither rich nor successful, but... 第三段:描述人物特点,表达自己敬佩的原因 ①He is honest and helpful. ②He always plays basketball with me. 【谋篇布局】 第四段:表达感情,升华主题 ①I love my father. ②I want to be a person like him in the future. 巧衔接 ①描写人物形象和特点时,可用and,but,neither...nor...,not only...but also...等。 ②在行文时,也可用 in my mind, get along with等高级词汇。 【句子升格】 My father is also my teacher. He always teaches me to be a good person.(用定语从句将两个句子合并)   【范文赏读】 The Person I Admire Most My father is my hero, and I admire him most. My father is a worker. He always works hard. He isn't tall. He is neither rich nor successful. But he is great in my mind. My father is honest and helpful. He often helps others with all kinds of problems. On Sundays, he always plays football with me. My father is also my teacher who always teaches me to be a good person. He teaches me how to get along with my classmates. I love my father. When I grow up, I want to be a true man like him. 【学以致用】 　　[2021永州中考改编]每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字,如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈……假如你是李华,请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件,介绍你心目中的一位英雄。 要求:(1) 信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹; 　　 (2)信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名; 　　 (3)80词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 Dear Linda, 　　How are you getting on?I'm writing this email to share a story with you.  Yours, Li Hua 答案 【句子升格】 My father is also my teacher who always teaches me to be a good person. 答案 【学以致用】 Dear Linda.  　　How are you getting on? I'm writing this email to share a story with you. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Zhong Nanshan is a hero. He is one of the most famous doctors in China.  　　In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhon