Unit 11 作文学案 2023-2024学年人教版九年级英语全册

Unit11作文学案 【范文1】 英语复习及对其感受 为了帮助学生迎接中考,在中考前几个月,老师一般会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心(English Teaching Research Center )正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况,谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法,并提出建议。 提示:1.Your feelings about your English revision classes. 2. Class activities: a. What did your English teacher usually do in class? b. What did you usually do in class? 3.Your advice on English revision classes to your English teacher. 要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 3.词数不少于 80,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 【范文1】 I think my English revision[r v n](n.复审;修订) classes were useful but tiring. In class, my English teacher kept talking from the beginning to the end(从头到尾), which made me bored and sleepy(非限制性定语从句).She explained the rules of words and grammar. We did nothing but listen and take notes(记笔记). She always asked us to memorize[ mem ra z]( vt. 记住,熟记)all the words we had learned. There were so many exercises to do and exams to take, which made me stressed out压力大. I hope English revision classes can be more enjoyable[ n d bl]有乐趣的.We can play games and role-play conversations. It's a good idea to have discussions with our partners in English. What's more, I like teachers who are always with a smile(定语从句). It will make me more comfortable(make+宾语+adj.使某人/某物变得......). 我觉得我的英语复习课很有用,但也很累。在课堂上,我的英语老师从头到尾一直在说话,这让我又烦又困。她解释了单词和语法的规则。我们什么也没做,只听和做笔记。她总是要求我们记住我们所学到的所有单词。有太多的练习要做和考试,这让我压力很大。 我希望英语复习课能更令人愉快。我们可以玩游戏和进行角色扮演式的对话。和我们的合作伙伴用英语进行讨论是个好主意。更重要的是,我喜欢那些总是带着微笑的老师。这会让我更舒服的。 【拓展1】 在成长的过程中,你一定经历过许多事情,这些事情或许让你开心、难过,或许让你感动、难忘。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题,介绍你的一次难忘的经历。 内容包括: (1)介绍事情的起因、经过、结果; (2)这件事情给你带来的感受; (3)你从这件事中学到了什么。 作文要求: (1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 【拓展1 范文】 An Unforgettable Experience As we all know, everyone has his or her unforgettable([ nf et bl]难忘的) experiences[ k sp ri ns](n. 经验;经历).I still remember the first time I made a milk shake(n. 奶昔) for my mother. Since(因为) my mother really likes drinking milk shakes, I wanted to make one for her.