内容正文:
【金太阳联考】书面表达
改革开放(reform and opening-up)以来,中国发生了巨大变化,在许多方面都取得了成功。请你以此为话题,用英语写一篇短文,向你校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 概括变化;
2. 你的感受;
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
The Great Transformations of China
改革开放带来的巨变
审题
体裁:短文投稿(说明文)
时态:现在完成时为主+一般现在时/一般将来时
人称:第三人称为主+第一人称
谋篇布局:
Para 1 引入话题(改革开放给中国带来了巨变)+概括巨变/成就(详写:2-3方面;找切入点/角度——政治、经济、科技、文化、生活等领域【衣食住行等】;注意:积极正面)
Para 2 感受(自豪、幸福、喜悦、感激、赞叹等)
Para 3 期待(缩小区域差距、保护生态环境、注重可持续性发展、提升幸福指数、促进社会公平正义等)
Useful expressions
引入&变化/成就
【开篇】
There is no denying that China has undergone great transformations/ great changes have taken place in China since the launch/start/implementation of reform and opening up in 1978, which has ushered in a new era of development for our country. (which从句还可以这样写a. generate significant economic benefits for the Chinese people; b. bring China from a relatively poor country to the world's second-largest economy)
列举变化/成就
1 issue favourable policies to support the development of...
2 abolish agricultural land tax & ease the burden on farmers
3 relieve/alleviate/eliminate/remove poverty
4 step out of/get rid of poverty (achieve the goal of eliminating extreme poverty)
5 take the lead in the development of new energy automobiles
6 develop/boast the world's best high-speed railway system
7 embrace the world with an open and inclusive attitude
8 establish/develop close ties with the rest of the world
9 bring peace, progress and prosperity to the world ( the Belt and Road Initiative)
期待
10 pursue high-quality development and high-standard opening up
11 improve the livelihood of the people
12 address the disparity between regions/narrow regional disparities
13 prioritize/give priority to valuable technological innovation (place/put/lay emphasis on.../attach great importance to...)
【结尾】
Hopefully, priority should be given to improve/boost the well-being of people living and working in China and ensure the protection and preservation of the environment as well as economic development. ( protect the ecological environmen