内容正文:
2024届广东省一模
英语试题
“五字真经”
写作部分答案详解
广东省一模
书面表达
写作要点:
写作时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:
(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
写作过程: 审题 —— 构思 —— 成文
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你校将举办“经典文化探索展”,并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.观看时间、方式;
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
写作步骤1——审题
写作步骤1——审题
审文体
审时态
审人称
审要点
邮件
一般现在时、一般将来时
第一人称
介绍“经典文化探索展”活动及目的
提出观看直播的时间与方式
“你”对这项活动的期待
1、再次概括,希望邀请能被接受
2、指出对这次活动的个人展望
1、介绍活动目的
2、强调活动意义
引入
正文
1、发出邀请
2、指出活动观看时间和方式
结尾
邀请参与线上直播活动
写作步骤2——构思提纲
开篇:
Knowing that you are curious about traditional Chinese civilization, I am writing to invite you to watch an online exhibition with the theme of “Exploration of Classical Culture”.(宾语从句)
正文:
The online exhibition, organized by students in our school, focuses on the dynamic development of ancient artifacts that have flourished for thousands of years.
(介绍活动及活动目的)
结尾:
I hope the exhibition can not only help you gain a deeper insight into Chinese culture but also……(并列结构,说出自己的展望,由浅入深)
写作步骤2——构思细节
Knowing that you are curious about traditional Chinese civilization, I am writing to invite you to watch an online exhibition with the theme of “Exploration of Classical Culture”.
写作步骤3——成文
引入部分
写信目的
活动名称
The online exhibition, organized by students in our school, focuses on the dynamic development of ancient artifacts that have flourished for thousands of years. Initially, you can watch a video clip which describes the glamour of conventional artistic work through vivid images and special sound effects created by teenagers, offering a feast to your ears and eyes. What highlights the activity is the Q-A section for viewers to interact with the creators and participate in the program. You can watch the display through clicking on the website: www.smart.com at 7:00pm on March 24th.
写作步骤3——成文
正文部分
活动介绍
参与方式
I hope the exhibition can not only help you gain a deeper insight into Chinese culture but also stimulate your initiative to appreciate the ch