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续写结尾句
Lisa 2024.3
类型(1)结尾点题式
点题式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时,通过一两句话点明文章主旨突出文章的立意。一般可以通过总结阅读材料写出点题式结尾。
公式1▶(形容词+)无灵主语+动词( + in one's mind/heart...或+宾语/宾语从句)
★无灵主语一般指作主语的表情感、时间、地点等的名词或短语主旨通常蕴含在无灵主语或宾语从句中,作定语的形容词常符合主旨情感色彩。
万用语料
1 . The narrow escape enlightened me about how treasurable life was.这次死里逃生使得我意识到生命是多么珍贵。
2. The funny story taught us that never should we judge a book by its cover这个有趣的故事告诫我们永远不要以貌取人。
3. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project.这整个经历提醒我,团队合作是我们成功地完成这项任务的关键。
4.From then on, the precious value of hard work took deep root in my heart.encouraging me to move forward in my life.从那以后,努力工作的珍贵价值深深扎根于我的心中,鼓励着我在生活中继续前进。
公式2▶When/Whenever/Every time looking back on/thinking of/...the story/experience/...,sb. still feels. ..
★时间状语从句(省略形式)承接前文所述故事,主句用来点明主题。这种结尾使主旨表达清晰而凝练。
万用语料
1. Whenever thinking of that heart-warming scene , Jenna couldn't help getting deeply moved by the selfless love and care of her neighbours. 每当Jenna想起那暖心的场景,她都会情不自禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。
2. Every time we talked about the terrifying incident, I thought that it was Father's bravery and wisdom that saved our lives in such a dangerous situation.每当我们谈论起那次可怕的事件,我认为正是父亲的勇敢和智慧在那样危险的情况下拯救了我们的生命。
3. I would still feel a strong sense of responsibility as part of the community whenever I looked back on the volunteering service.每当我回忆起那次志愿者服务经历,我仍然会有一种强烈的作为社区一员的责任感。
公式3▶衔接语+sb.+逐渐/终于/突然意识到/感觉到+呼应首段...
★"衔接语"承接前文,"呼应首段...."点明文章主题。这个表达方式前后呼应,结构完整,使文章浑然成为一体。
万用语料
1 . Not until then did I come to understand what my teacher meant by saying "You're unique in the world."直到那时,我才明白我老师说的"你是世界上独一无二的"是什么意思。
2. Eventually, the reason why my mother got popular in the community struck me---It was because of her kindness and readiness to help others.最终我突然意识到妈妈在社区受人欢迎的原因---她的善良和乐于助人。
3. At the sight of my parents’ working hard in the fields , it occurred to me that it was their selfless devotion that gave me a happy life.见到父母在田间辛勤劳作的身影,我突然醒悟,正是他们无私的奉献给了我幸福的生活。
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