内容正文:
读后续写之无灵主语与情绪描写
Continuation Writing---Inanimate Subjects & Emotions
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Lead-in
torch火炬
torchbearer
火炬手
torch relay
火炬传递
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Chebu Senior High School
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Lead-in
If you were in her place, how would you feel?
When I was holding the torch,...
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Chebu Senior High School
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Concept
sentence pattern:inanimate subject(无灵主语)+animate verb(有灵动词)
Example:我忘记他的名字了。
I forgot his name.
inanimate subject+animate verb:
His name escaped me.
His name failed me.
His name slipped my mind.
lifeless(无生命的) nouns
verbs describing
the actions of
living things
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Chebu Senior High School
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5 Types of Inanimate Subjects(Observe & Summarize)
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Type 1
Panic seized her. 她突然惊慌失措。
Despair choked her words. 她绝望得说不出话来。
A great sense of relief flooded over him. 他深感宽慰。
Summary 1:Inanimate subjects are the nouns decribing ________________________.
feelings or emotions
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The following year saw the death of his mother.
第二年他的妈妈去世了。
The town boasts a beautiful lake.
这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。
Dead silence suddenly fell.死寂突然降临。
Type 2
Summary 2:Inanimate subjects are the nouns decribing ___________________________.
time/places/situations
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Group 3:
The thick fog blanketed the field.
浓雾笼罩着整个大地。
An earthquake came like a thief in the night,without warning.
地震到来,犹如夜贼,不作预告。
The rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。
Type 3
Summary 3 :Inanimate subjects are the nouns decribing _________________________________.
natural phenomena(现象)
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Group 4:
Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present.
我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
Smile crumpled his face. 他笑得一脸皱纹。
Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声萦绕在房间里。
Type 4
Summary 4: Inanimate subjects are the nouns decribing _____________________________________.
body parts/looks/voices
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