书面表达错误分类及纠错 观摩课课件 2024届高三英语二轮复习

Classification and Correction of Mistakes in the Composition Activity 1 Presentation classification 1. Chinglish 2. Excess English 3. Misusage of Expression 4. Grammar mistake 5. Spelling mistake 6. Fixed mismatch 7. Punctuation error Activity 2 Examples and Correction 一、Chinglish 1. He browses Friend Circle every day and counts how many dianzan he gets. 2. I arrived at the square, where there are people mountains, people sea. 3. You di da di da me, I hua la hua la you. 4. As a senior three student, his stress/pressure is very big/great. 5.I have a good health/I have a healthy body. /My body is very good/healthy. He browses Moments every day and counts how many likes he gets. I arrived at the square, where there are huge crowds of people. A favor of drop water should be paid with a surprising spring As a senio three student, he is under great stress. I’m in good health./I keep/am fit/healthy 二、Excess English 1. She married with a tall, richand handsome man. 2. With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller. 3. We should serve for people heart and soul. 4. Because he studied hard, so he finally passed the final exam. 5. Let’s have a class meeting on this Friday morning. 6. The moment when I think of my motto, I will become energetic and devote myself to what I am doing. 7. We lost the game, but we didn’t lose our heart. 删掉with 删掉more and more 删掉for 删掉so 删掉when 删掉our 删掉on 三、Misusage of Expressions 1. One day, I was beating an umbrella in the rain when a girl stood by the roadside, wet throughout. 2. I wonder if you are convenient to meet my uncle at the airport. 3. I learned a lot during I stayed in Britain last year. 4. With he grew older and older, he became more and more mature. 5. We continued to work in the field despite it rained heavily. 7. I have received your letter for three days. 8. Welcome you to join in our discussion soon. beating改为holding up I