Unit 12 Section Ⅳ WRITING（Word教参）-【优化指导】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第四册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅳ　WRITING 介绍著名人物及其成就 [对应学生用书P129] 人物介绍类文章属于记叙文的范畴，包括介绍人物的外貌、生平、成就等。写作时要抓住人物的典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物特征，并把握好时间、地点、人物、事件等记叙文的要素。 [写作技巧]　 人物介绍类文章的基本结构： 1．开头：先总体描写，即对该人物进行简要介绍，如年龄、性别、出生地、家庭、身份、职业、教育背景、外表、性格特点和特长爱好等； 2．主体：详细介绍人物的特点、生平、成就等，可以按照时间顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行描述； 3．结尾：对人物的评价或感想。 [典例剖析] 请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。 1．1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异； 2．1939年在美国获航空、数学博士学位； 3．1955年回到祖国； 4．为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献，被誉为“中国航天之父”； 5．2009年于北京去世。 注意：词数80左右。 参考词汇：航空航天科学技术aerospace science and technology; 博士学位doctorate _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ [词块积累] 1．将……视为…… regard ...as ... 2．深造 further study 3．获得博士学位 obtain one's doctorate 4．返回到 come back to 5．致力于 be devoted to 6．去世 pass away 7．获得尊重和崇拜 receive the respect and admiration 8．国内外 at home and abroad [连词成句] 1．1911年钱学森出生于上海。 Qian Xuesen was born in 1911 in Shanghai． 2．钱学森被誉为“中国航天之父”。 Qian Xuesen was regarded as the Father of China's Space Program． 3．1935年，钱学森赴美国深造。 In 1935, Qian went to America for further study． 4．1939年，他在美国获得了航天科学和数学博士学位。 In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US． 5．1955年，他成功地回到了中国。 He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955． 6．此后，他一直致力于航天科技事业，为中国的航天事业做出了巨大贡献。 Since then he had been devoted to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace． 7．因为他对祖国的热爱和他的巨大成就，他受到了国内外的尊敬和钦佩。 He is respected and admired at home and abroad for his love for his motherland and his great achievements． [句式升级] 1．用分词作状语连接句1和句2 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the Father of China's Space Program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai． 2．用because of和短语receive the respect and admiration升级句7 Because of his love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from home and abroad． [连句成篇] _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the Father of China's Space Program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. In 1935, Qian went to America for further study. In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955.Since then he had been devoted to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from home and abroad. 请根据以下材料，写一篇介绍我国明代医学家李时珍的文章。 姓名 李时珍 出生年代 1518 著作及其内容 《本草纲目》：中草药总集，包含近2 000种中草药，数百万字 经历 访民间，走群山，尝百草，亲身做实验 成书时间 1578年，历时27年 评价 对我国医学发展做出了重大贡献 注意：词数80左右。 参考词汇：Compendium of Materia Medica《本草纲目》；Chinese herbs中草药；medical scientist医学家 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Known as a famous medical scientist in Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.He wrote a book called Compendium of Materia Medica which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2，000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters. In order to finish the task, he visited mountains, called on ordinary people, tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself. It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine. 读后续写——生活经历篇 [对应学生用书P131] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草)．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don't be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 第一步：文章信息提取 时空线：It was summer→in the late afternoon→a delicious dinner→spent the night→early in the morning→After breakfast→In the afternoon→After a while→the late afternoon sun 情感线：(对度假充满期待)treat me to a vacation like never before→(享受农场的宁静) listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby→(对骑马感到新奇)I was impressed to see ...looked really cool.→(想要体验骑马)asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride→(第一次尝试骑马)headed slowly towards the mountains→(山上的景色突出主人公内心的满足感)It was so peaceful and quiet ...looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 第二步：语篇要点审读 Who：the author, the author's father, Uncle Paul and his family When: in the afternoon Where: on the hill What: first experience riding a horse 第三步：续写方向猜想 续写段首1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.(提示句表明兔子的出现使马受惊，可描述马受惊后的情景，注意人物心理活动的描写，并兼顾动作描写。结合原文中的关键词dad, get lost, track等可勾勒出以下细节：马受惊奔跑→“我”惊恐万分→爸爸大喊并指导，马终于停下→“我”如释重负，却发现迷失方向。) 猜想1：What would happen to the author and his dad when they came across a rabbit? 猜想2：What danger did they face? ... 续写段首2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.(提示句表明作者他们迷路了，天也黑了，呼应原文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——“Don't be late for supper.”，续写可从迷路后如何寻路返回农场着手。结合原文中的关键词Uncle Paul, river, farm house, sight等可勾勒出以下细节：迷路后“我”和父亲想办法回到Paul叔叔的家→“我”想到沿着河返回农舍→不久就看见了远处的农舍。) 猜想1：What would happen to them? 猜想2：What did the author's father do? 猜想3：How did the author and his father resolve the dilemma? ... Paragraph 1： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. However, it became scared and started to run like crazy.“Don't let go of the rope! Keep calm！” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me. To my relief, it stopped slowly. But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. Paragraph 2： We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply. Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to calm down. It was then that my mind raced.“Listen, Dad, the rushing river water，” I shouted excitedly, “we can return to the farm house down the river.” Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the distance. We knew we were safe. What a thrilling vacation we had! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$