读后续写 狗的故事 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

2 0 2 3 e7d195523061f1c0deeec63e560781cfd59afb0ea006f2a87ABB68BF51EA6619813959095094C18C62A12F549504892A4AAA8C1554C6663626E05CA27F281A14E6983772AFC3FB97135759321DEA3D70CCCB10945EC5A0322096E752803368C2184698845E3CCD6DB7F651295A8E4F3FDC19EA64A2B4A4AC1434B55AAE41CF0BF61B375C23F3039959E085EE760725AA 读后续写讲评 — A Dog’s Story 1 人与动物篇的续写文章主题 人与动物故事一般围绕两方面展开： 具体如下： 1.旅途偶遇危险凶猛动物 本着保护且不能伤害野生动物，遭遇时可设法驱赶，或择机躲避，确保双方安全无恙。最终大多依靠外援救助成功脱困。 2.旅途遭遇无危险动物或是救助小动物 这些动物的出现只是给旅途增添一点乐趣和曲折，体验一次难忘惊险或救助的经历。如rabbit, sheep, cow等。  3.家养动物的趣事囧事或是相互治愈 dog，cat，duck等和人类交往中产生情感依赖，互相陪伴，安慰或治愈(heal a lonely soul)，共同度过艰难黑暗时期(get us through gloomy days)。 1. 人与动物和谐相处，相亲相助 2. 人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险 Para 1: He knew very well what I meant. Para 2: When we went back home, Stickeen was a changed dog. 读后续写做题思路：剧情主线&特写镜头 关键在于设计情节！ Step.1 慢看首句，抓重点(特写镜头) Step.2 慢看文章，找考点(剧情主线) Step.3 快看文章，找燃料(特写镜头) 冲突 尝试解决 问题解决， 美好结局 反应 转折 理清文章Storyline故事线 明线：情节发展 暗线：情感变化 My First Template IC.文本解读 1.I had an independent and clever dog named Stickeen.He enjoyed the delicious food that my family preparec for him every day.He often ran out of my sight when walking with me. 2.Early one morning,I went to explore a nearby glacier(冰川). Stickeen followed me and together we went upon 登上了 the glacier. Later, I discovered that we were trapped between two very deep cracks(裂缝)in the glacier. The only way across it was a very thin ice that connected the cracks,I made a path 开辟了一条道路across the “bridge” and got to the other side. But my dog was afraid to have a try and began to cry. After taking another careful look at the large cracks,he ran away hopelessly 绝望地逃跑 to find some other crossings.By the time he got back,he was confused of course. 首段是整篇文章的眼，也是续写部分的提示。后文需要呼应。 第二段描述了故事矛盾的开始— 遇到了困难(被困在冰川的两条很深的裂缝之间)。 反应： 人-- made a path, got to the other side 狗-- ... afraid to have a try and began to cry Para 2: When we went back home, Stickeen was a changed dog. The dog’s feature: *an independent and clever dog *He often ran out