内容正文:
【2024·3月 潍坊市滨州市2024届高考第一次模拟考试】
你校将举办以“讲故事,话家风”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“My family tradition”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.一件家风小事;
2.对你的影响。
要求:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 题目和第一段段首句已给出。
My Family Tradition
It’s an honor to talk about my family tradition. ________
一、要点分析及段落分配
1. 好写的家风有哪些?
家风有很多,但是像诚实正直、邻里互助、谨言慎行这些都不太好写。个人认为可以从热爱读书、孝敬老人、勤俭节约中三选一入手。
2. 段落内容应如何分配?
一些同学看到题目中只有2个要点,就觉得这篇文章只能写2段。但还是建议大家写成三段式。下面是我的设计:
Para1:【逻辑:先下定义再举例】先说明我家的家风是什么,然后再举一件家风小事,完成要点1。
Para2:【逻辑:总分】先总结这个家风对我影响很大,然后写对我产生的2方面影响,完成要点2。既然是两方面,用on one hand, on the other hand进行逻辑并列就比较合适了。
Para3:【逻辑:由现在到未来】既然这篇是演讲稿,那结尾处我们可以总结、祝愿、倡议、展望。在这篇里我用展望,即我决心把这个家风传递给下一代。
二、范文呈现
Version1: 热爱读书
My Family Tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition. In my household, we cherish the tradition of reading. Every evening, instead of watching TV, my family gathers in the living room where each person dives into their own book. This simple act embodies our family’s love for reading, a passion passed down through generations.
This tradition has significantly impacted me. On one hand, it has immensely broadened my horizons, introducing me to diverse cultures and ideas. On the other hand, this tradition has cultivated in me a profound sense of empathy and understanding towards others.
I am determined to carry this tradition forward. By doing so, I hope to not only preserve our family tradition but also inspire a lifelong love for reading in the generations to come.
能谈谈我的家族传统是我的荣幸。在我家里,我们珍视阅读的传统。每天晚上,我的家人不是看电视,而是聚在客厅里,每个人都沉浸在自己的书中。这个简单的举动体现了我们家对阅读的热爱,一种世代相传的热情。
这个传统对我的影响很大。一方面,它极大地开阔了我的视野,向我介绍了不同的文化和思想。另一方面,这种传统也培养了我对他人深刻的同理心和理解。
我决心把这一传统发扬光大。通过这样做,我希望不仅能保留我们的家庭传统,还能激发后代对阅读的终身热爱。
Version2: 孝敬老人
My Family Tradition
It's an honor to talk about my family tradition. In my family, respecting and honoring elders is a cherished tradition. A small yet profound tradition we uphold is celebrating every elder's birthday by gathering together, sharing stories, and expressing our gratitude for their wisdom and guidance.
This tradition has p