内容正文:
主题三 生活与学习(身心健康)
主题写作
青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题,对1,127名学生进行了问卷调查,如图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生,请结合如图信息,以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题,用两.段.话.写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 简要说明图的内容;
2. 从图中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积.极.的影响。
1. 词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
要求:
审文体 —— 说明文
审内容 —— 1. 用百分比简要说明图的内容;2. 从图中任选一项,并结合自己的亲身经历谈谈它给你的生活带来的积极影响。
审时态 —— 说明图的内容时,用 一般现在时 ;讲述亲身经历时,用 一般过去时 。
审人称 —— 第一人称
说明文
一般现在时
一般过去时
第一人称
本文要求结合自己的亲身经历谈谈你的态度给你的生活带来的积极影响,可分两段进行写作。请同学们试着补全下面的写作导图吧。
Paragraph 1 :
Detailed description of the chart
86%的学生认为他们能用善意的眼光看世界,53%的学生认为自己是积极的,47%的学生认为他们不爱抱怨。
Description:
86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes .
53 percent consider themselves positive .
47 percent think they don’t like to complain.
believe they can see the world
with kind eyes
consider themselves positive
Paragraph 2 :
My attitude(态度) and its positive influence on my life
我认为我是个积极的人。上个月我参加英语表演,虽然很难,但我把它当作一次挑战。我努力练习,最终成功。我的积极的态度对我帮助很大。
My attitude:
I find myself really positive.
Its positive influence:
Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me . However, I regarded it as a challenge. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it. My positive attitude helps me a lot.
was difficult for me
1. 60%的学生认为坐火车旅行很方便。
60% of the students think traveling by train is convenient.
60% of the students believe / hold the view that traveling by train is convenient. (用believe / hold the view等引出观点的表达方式改写)
60% of the students believe / hold the view that traveling by
train is convenient.
2. 许多人把旅游看作是一种放松方式。
Many people see traveling as a way to relax.
Many people consider traveling a way to relax. (用consider