2024年外研版中考英语作文写作专题课件

书面表达 学习目标: 1.通过话题分析,以思维导图方式理清关于记叙文文章的写作思路。 2.通过对一次难忘的劳动经历的写作练习,能够独立完成收到礼物的生活经历话题的写作。 你校英语社团在学校网站上开设了“我劳动,我最美”栏目,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,记述自己一次难忘的劳动经历。 内容提示: 1.简要介绍时间、地点、人 物及劳动过程。 2.谈谈你的收获或感受。 要求:1.100词左右。 2.要点齐全,可适当发挥。 3.文中不要出现真实学校和姓 名。 一次难忘的劳动经历 第一人称为主 一般过去时为主 4.时态 1.审主题 3.审人称 be:was/ were 实义动词:did 2.审体裁 记叙文 一次难忘的劳动经历 地点? 选择去那里的原因? 感受? 能做什么? 时间? 我 时间 地点 劳动 过程 1.yesterday(morning/afternoon) the day before yesterday 2.last (year/month/week/night) 3....ago 4.in +年份 on+具体的时间 5.when I ... 6.after school/before dinner/... word bank 做家务 do housework 打扫 sweep 打扫地板 sweep the floor 洗 wash 洗衣服/盘子 wash the clothes/dishes 做饭 cook cook the meal/breakfast/dinner/... 收拾、整理 tidy up put away in/at 感受 经历 一次难忘的经历 an unforgettable experence 有意义的 meaningful 必要的 necessary 帮助做 help ...do/with 劳累的 tired 兴奋的 excited 自豪的 proud 使某人。。。 make sb +adj 做家务 do housework 打扫 打扫地板 sweep the floor 洗 洗衣服/盘子 wash the clothes/dishes 做饭 cook the meal/breakfast/dinner/... 收拾、整理 tidy up put away 一次难忘的经历 an unforgettable experence 有意义的 meaningful 必要的 necessary 帮助做 help ...do/with 劳累的 tired 兴奋的 excited 自豪的 proud 使某人。。。 make sb +adj/v sweep wash cook Topic sentence Activity1 Activity3 Activity2 Conclusion 点明主题 活动细节 回扣主题,抒发感受 丰富细节 Hamburger structure 8 Can you “make” your “hamburger”? topic sentence 去年母亲节,我想做家务。 On Mother's Day last year, I wanted to do housework./do some cleaning. Conclusion On Mother's Day last year,I wanted to do housework./do some cleaning. Activity1 Activity3 Activity2 I swept the floor. I cleaned the table. I put away the clothes. Conclusion 这是一个难忘的劳动经历。 It was an unforgettable labor experience. On Mother's Day last year,I wanted to do housework./do some cleaning. I swept the floor. I cleaned the table. I put away the clothes. <10’ It was an unforgettable labor experience. Improve your passage Top bread Bottom bread Middle part topic sentence 去年母亲节,我想做家务。 On Mother's Day last year,I wanted to do housework./do some cleaning. 去年母亲节,我父母不在家,我决定为我妈妈做点什么。 On Mother’s Day last year, my parents were not at h