2021读后续写作文指导（适合基础薄弱同学）课件-2024届高三英语二轮复习

A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE 【2021.06 新高考一卷】 circle: 1.main characters(emtion +personality) 2.plot (the problem to be solved) 3.time (changed? be special?) 4.place (changed? be special?) 5.theme (title) 6.given sentences Coherence : as many as possible words phrases 1. Who 2. Where 3. When 4. What happened 5. Why（theme） twins--Jenna（a girl）& Jeff(a boy), mother, father in the kitchen At 6:00 am The twins wanted to make breakfast for mom as a Mother's Day surprise express gratitude and love to their mom Read for elements upstairs： in the bedroom Summary: The story is about the twins(who) trying to prepare breakfast (what) in the kitchen (where) on Mother’s Day morning(when) to give a surprise for their mom (why)but they met with some difficulties. Read two given sentences As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 情节思路——ARE原则（Action、Response、Emotion） ① father’s response ( -- ) ②Father helped them prepare the breakfast how+what ③The breakfast was ready. ① mother’s response and the twins ② the scene of the morning (breakfast) celebration of Mother’s Day ③the theme Gratitude to mother’s hard work\Housework needs to be learned, shared by every family member. Read two given sentences As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Coherence （4 sentences) ① Looking at the mess in the kitchen , Dad was a bit annoyed. ② After the breakfast was ready, the twins were eager to let mother enjoy the delicious food at once. ③ Upon opening eyes, what greeted her instantly was a plate of hot and tasty breakfast. ④ A warm current of love filled the whole room. What a sweet surprise! 父亲了解缘由（relieved ）--加入制作（encourage and instruct）--目的达成（delighted） 母亲看到惊喜早餐（surpised，moved）--父亲反应（proud ）--共同庆祝（happy） WRITE Write ：Make full use of the original text 决定煮粥 放一些大米到水壶 打二个鸡蛋到