内容正文:
读后续写——2024九省联考
CONTENTS
目录
01 阅读分析
02 写作流程
故事框架整理
故事大纲
Background Rising Action + Climax Falling Action Resolution
人物 人设 问题:矛盾/冲突 如何解决 故事结局 文章结尾
原文回顾
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
人物介绍
主要冲突:K责备H
H有错,后面改正
H没错,K道歉
故事框架整理
故事大纲
Background Rising Action + Climax Falling Action Resolution
人物 人设 问题:矛盾/冲突 如何解决 故事结局 文章结尾
人物
Maya
Hilda
Katherine
人设
海豚
海洋馆清理工
海豚训练师
矛盾/冲突
在Hilda打扫干净水池之后,Maya衔来了糖纸,Katherine认为Hilda没有认真工作
如何解决
???
原文回顾
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
人物介绍
Hilda 决定追踪Maya 一探究竟
原文回顾
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
次日,Hilda 下水检查没有发现任何东西
同时看到,Katherine 也下水检查,不出意外,也没有任何东西
Katherine 对Hilda 的工作不放心,不信任
原文回顾
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