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满分策略2 借鉴18个真题满分模板
模板1 建议信 (2023·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
首段:①说明问题或对方遇到的困难;②说明写信目的
We’re excited about your plan for oral practice, but I’d like to share a different voice. While I appreciate the intention behind random pairings, I see some potential challenges. (写信目的)
中间段:①建议1+理由;②建议2+理由;③建议3+理由或①具体说明问题;②建议1+理由;③建议2+理由
When two students with different backgrounds are paired randomly, finding common topics can be tough. Additionally, if both students struggle with spoken English, they might not effectively help each other, possibly minimizing their motivation to improve. (提出问题) Thus, I wonder if you could allow us to pair up freely and you can make adjustments if necessary. This might increase our motivation to speak and learn. Also, it could be more beneficial to group students with mixed English levels intentionally, thus ensuring our mutual improvement. (提出建议)
尾段:表示愿望
Your understanding and consideration would be greatly appreciated. (表示期待)
模板2 短文 (2023·全国乙卷满分作文)
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.简要描述;2.体验和感受。
首段:①引入介绍的事件/活动;②介绍其重要性、目的等
Last summer, I learned how to make some home-cooked dishes like Fried Eggs with Tomatoes, which turned out to be a rewarding and fulfilling experience. (提出自己学的新技能)
中间段:简要介绍事件/活动(或其他方面),注意利用恰当的衔接词汇
Previously, I considered cooking hard so I never thought of learning it. However, under the patient guidance of my mother, I learnt Fried Eggs with Tomatoes by trial and error. The moment I served the dish I made, my parents couldn’t wait to take a bite of it and gave me a thumbs-up. (简要描述经历、体验)
尾段:简要评价/感想/感受
Overall, not only did acquiring the skill give me the joy of success, but it also encouraged me to embrace new challenges. (感受)
模板3 人物介绍类短文 (2023·全国甲卷满分作文)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。
首段:说明介绍的人物
Among the Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan stands out as the most influential one in my opinion.