内容正文:
Unit4 Why don’t you talk to your parents?
Section B 3a~3c Writing
too much homework
not enough sleep
too many exams
Have you met these problems?
Problems
too many after-school classes
Should student have so many after-school classes?
What’s your opinion?
孩子是否该上课外班?
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孩子该不该上课外班的讨论
以烦恼为话题进行提出合理建议的写作
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单元写作话题
Unit 4
提建议的句型
why don't you...
you should/could/can
you'd better...
Firstly...secondly...What's more/In a word...
发表自己的观点In my opion/As for me/I think....
论据明确
再次点名自己观点。
Review some sentences:
1. 疲惫的孩子们直到晚上七点钟后才到家。
2. 他们总是将自己的孩子与其他的孩子相 比较。
The tired children don’t get home until after 7:00 p.m.
They always compare their children with other children.
3. 他们为什么不让孩子们顺其自然呢?
4. 所有这些活动会给孩子们导致很大的压力。
Why don’t they let their kids be kids?
All these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
3b
Write a letter to the magazine to express your opinions on after-school classes for children. Use the following expressions to help you.
I agree with … because…
I disagree with … because …
Beginning
Body
Ending
All in all, …/In a word,…
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【写作任务】
某杂志就“孩子该不该上课外班”对几位家长进行了采访,他们都同意孩子上,你对此持什么态度呢?假如你是Tom,请你向该杂志写一封信表达你的观点。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(书信);信的主体部分为议论文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称和第三人称
(1)首先,应开门见山地描述课后辅导班这一社会现象。
(2)然后,明确表明自己的看法,是支持还是
不支持。
(3)接下来再用表格中所给的句型结构,列举
自己的想法或原因。
1. 写作思路梳理
写作流程
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
表明观点 I don’t think that children should take after-school classes.
论证观点 ◆Most parents hope that their children can improve their grades by (1)_________________________(上课外班) but they don’t realize (意识到) their children can get good grades by listening to the teacher carefully in class and finding a good way of learning.
taking after-school classes
列提纲 写句子
论证观点 ◆Learning from a young age is important but in my opinion, (2)______________________________
__________________(孩子们的健康和快乐更重要). I don’t think parents should (3)_______________________
(把孩子们逼得太紧). They should (4)___________________________ (给他们足够的时间去放松). Children need to be successful but they also need to be h