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板块三　写作 三类错误分解 三　行文逻辑错误 专题五　短文改错 1 错误1——时态不一致 1．(2023·全国乙卷)The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman whose hair color looked just perfect． _____________ 2．(2022·全国甲卷)However，after I went to high school，somehow I become distant from him． _______________ 3．(2023·成都市模拟)I got up and go over to his table and asked if I could get him something to drink． ________ choose→chose become→became go→went 三　行文逻辑错误 4．(2023·西安市第八十三中学模拟)We cut the newspapers, stick the pieces together and even coloured them． ____________ 5．(2023·咸阳市模拟)When I gave the gift to her, she said it was the most precious gift she have ever received． _________ 6．(2023·银川二中模拟)The doctor tells my parents my ankle was badly broken and that I needed to stay in bed for a month． ___________ stick→stuck have→had tells→told 三　行文逻辑错误 7．(2023·大同市适应性考试)They offered me coffee and other drinks．We have a good time talking and laughing together． _________ 8．(2023·宜宾市适应性考试)If we stayed at home, it will be comfortable and there will be no need to spend money． ___________ have→had stayed→stay 三　行文逻辑错误 时态不一致错误主要有三种情况：①简单句中的时态不一致。②并列句中的时态不一致。③主从句的时态不一致。 感悟与反思 三　行文逻辑错误 错误2——指代不一致 1．(2023·全国乙卷)Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair． ________ 2．(2022·全国乙卷)If you ride a bicycle, you don't use petrol．So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not causing air pollution． _________ his→her they→you 三　行文逻辑错误 3．(2021·全国甲卷)...Some will turn to their parents or teachers for help．Only a few choose to deal with the problems on our own． __________ 4．(2023·银川一中模拟)I am determined to make a contribution to society with our knowledge． _______ 5．(2023·成都七中“二诊”模拟)The headache was so terrible that I could hardly bear them． ________ 6．(2023·宜宾市适应性考试)When Mrs．Wu came into the classroom, I presented the flowers to him． ________ our→their our→my them→it him→her 三　行文逻辑错误 7．(2023·成都市联合测试)Foremost, we should remind people to raise our awareness of protection． __________ 8．(2023·南昌十中模拟)With the whistle blown, the participants