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写作技巧探究 三　丰富充实的细节信息 板块三　写 作 专题五　应用文写作 1 高考应用文写作多为开放性的，题目要求中的提示很少。如果只是简单翻译提示内容，词数肯定不够，因此在写作时需要适当充实一些与提示内容相关联的细节信息内容。 三　丰富充实的细节信息 1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明 [典例1]　网络学习在教育中起着非常重要的作用。 Online learning is playing a vital part in education． →Online learning is playing a vital part in education．It not only has brought me a number of surprises and benefits, but also provides me with flexible learning opportunities． [典例2]　中国传统文化有许多不同的表现形式。 Traditional Chinese culture takes many different forms． →Traditional Chinese culture takes many different forms, such as calligraphy, martial arts, shadow puppet plays as well as paper-cuts． 三　丰富充实的细节信息 [典例3]　整个赛道颇具挑战性。 The whole course was rather challenging． →The whole course was rather challenging, especially the part near the mountain, narrow and rough． 三　丰富充实的细节信息 2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 [典例1]　每个赛跑选手都尽全力完成任务。 Every runner tried their best to finish the task． →Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement． [典例2]　旅行了一周后，他回到了家。 After a week's trip, he returned home． →After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy． 三　丰富充实的细节信息 3．增添相关信息的时间、地点等内容 [典例1]　我们学校正在举办国画展。 Our school is hosting a traditional Chinese painting exhibition． →Our school is hosting a traditional Chinese painting exhibition this week at the Main Hall． [典例2]　我要去超市购物。 I'm going to do some shopping in the supermarket． →I'm going to do some shopping in the supermarket and won't be back until 5 o'clock in the afternoon． 三　丰富充实的细节信息 4．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 [典例1]　作为Youth的忠实读者，我总是专注于中学生版块。 As a faithful reader of Youth, I am always absorbed in columns for teenagers． →As a faithful reader of Youth, I am always absorbed in columns for teenagers, from which I can read inspiring stories and gain much pleasure from exciting news． 三　丰富充实的细节信息 [典例2]　我将参加一些社会活动。 I will take part in some social activities． →If possible, I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about s