Unit 11　写作能力提升练课件2023-2024学年人教版英语七年级下册

UNIT 11　 How was your school trip？ UNIT 11　写作能力提升练 请你根据下面的提示,以“A great school trip”为题写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,介绍上周六七年级一班去泰山(Mount Tai)郊游的情况及感受。 提示： ①活动内容及要求：游览泰山、画画、拍照；自带食物和水；②出发时间：周六早上七点；③集合地点：公共汽车站；④交通方式：公共汽车(3小时)。 ［谋篇布局］理清文章要素,构建文章结构。 一次很棒的 学校旅行 ［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 1. 早上七点他们在公共汽车站集合,然后乘公共汽车去泰山。 They  　met　⁠  　at　⁠  　the　⁠  　bus　⁠  　station　⁠ at seven o’clock in the morning and then they  　went　⁠  　to　⁠  　Mount　⁠  　Tai　⁠  　by　⁠  　bus　⁠ . met　 at　 the　 bus　 station　 went　 to　 Mount　 Tai　 by　 bus　 2. 到达那里花了他们三个小时。 I 　took　⁠ them  　3　⁠  　hours　⁠  　to　⁠  　get　⁠  　there　⁠ . 3. 他们随身带了一些水和食物。 They  　took　⁠  　some　⁠  　water　⁠  　and　⁠  　food　⁠ with them. took　 3　 hours　 to　 get　 there　 took　 some　 water　 and　 food　 4. 他们爬泰山,画了一些画,还拍了许多照片。 They  　climbed　⁠  　Mount　⁠  　Tai　⁠ and  　painted/drew　⁠  　some　⁠  　pictures　⁠ . They also  　took　⁠  　many　⁠  　photos　⁠ . 5. 他们虽累但是高兴。他们认为这是一次很棒的学校旅行。 They were  　tired　⁠  　but　⁠  　happy　⁠ . They thought it was  　a　⁠  　great　⁠  　school　⁠  　trip　⁠ . climbed　 Mount　 Tai　 painted/drew　 some　 pictures　⁠ took　 many　 photos　 tired　 but　 happy　 a　 great　 school　 trip　 ［巧妙衔接］记叙发生在过去的事情用一般过去时,运用总分总的方式构建文章结构,层次清晰,使文章形成一个整体。 Last Saturday, all the teachers and students of Class One, Grade Seven visited Mount Tai. They met at the bus station at seven o’clock in the morning and then they went to Mount Tai by bus. It took them three hours to get there. They took some water and food with them. They climbed Mount Tai and painted some pictures. They also took many photos. They were tired but happy. They thought it was a great school trip. A great school trip ［连句成篇］ 假如你是李华,上周三你参加了学校的旅行,请你根据活动海报,用英语写一篇70词左右的日记,记录你的见闻和感受。 Wednesday, March 25th Today I went on a school trip.  　We took the bus to Sunshine Farm. There I saw a lot of farm animals and did many interesting things. In the morning, I rode a horse. It was difficult but really interesting. After that, we helped the farmers feed the chickens. I also took many great photos of farm animals. We took t