Unit 10 写作能力提升练课件 2023-2024学年人教版八年级英语下册

UNIT 10　写作能力提升练 UNIT 10　I’ve had this bike for three years 　　你的家乡每天都在发生着日新月异的变化。请根据下面的提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题写一篇英语作文，描述一下你家乡的变化。内容包括： 1. 过去的家乡什么样； 2. 现在的家乡什么样； 3. 对未来家乡的期待。 要求： 1. 语法正确，语句通顺； 2. 词数80左右。 ［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 ［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。 1.我的家乡近几年发生了很大的变化。 My hometown 　has changed　⁠a lot in recent years. 2.它曾经是一个安静的地方。 It 　used to　⁠be a quiet place. 3.环境不如以前那么好了。 The environment is not 　as good as　⁠before. 4.我希望我的家乡越来越漂亮。 I hope my hometown will be 　more and more　⁠beautiful. has changed used to as good as more and more ［巧妙衔接］文章以时间为主轴，分别描写家乡的过去、现在和将来。使用表示时间的介词短语或副词，如in the past， nowadays， in the future等来衔接文章，使文章层次分明。 ［连句成篇］ The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. In the past， the air here was very fresh and the river was clean. The houses were small and old. People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a quiet place. Nowadays， things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel happy. But there are fewer trees， and the environment is not as good as before. I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful so that we can live a happier life in the future. 　　澳中友好协会准备举办以“A Gift from the Heart”为题的征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子里用心准备的礼物。 写作要求：词数：80～120； 参考要点：1. 介绍特别的日子； 2. 分享赠送的礼物；3. 表述礼物的意义。 A Gift from the Heart  　　It was the last day of one term. My classmates were very excited at the coming holiday. But my friend， Mike， looked unhappy because he failed the English test.　  　　It was the last day of one term. My classmates were very excited at the coming holiday. But my friend， Mike， looked unhappy because he failed the English test.　 　　While thinking about how to cheer him up， I saw my English notebook. Although it was very important to me， I decided to give it to him. He looked at me in surprise. He knew how carefully I took the notes. I told him that I could also help him learn English.　 　　Mike has mad