Unit 6 写作能力提升练课件 2023-2024学年人教版八年级英语下册

UNIT 6　An old man tried to move the mountains UNIT 6　写作能力提升练 　　【中考趋势题】假如你是李梅，请你根据下面所给图画，给大家讲述这一经典故事。 Sima Guang hit the tank ［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 ［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 1.院里有一个大水缸。缸里盛满了水。 There was a large water tank in the yard. It 　was　full of water　⁠. 2.他们正在玩时，一个小孩不慎掉进了水缸中。 When they were playing， one child accidentally 　fell into the tank　⁠. was　 full of water fell into the tank 3.他想了想，然后有了一个主意。他捡起一块大石头，砸向那个水缸。 He 　thought it over　⁠and then had an idea. He 　picked up a big sto ne　⁠and 　threw it at the water tank　⁠. thought it over picked up a big stone threw it at the water tank 4.缸破了，水流出来了。那个小孩得救了。 The tank broke and the water ran out. The child 　was saved　⁠. was saved ［巧妙衔接］本文按照故事发生的时间顺序，运用when， so...that等交代故事的发展和高潮，使故事发生的全过程紧密相连，脉络清晰。 ［连句成篇］ Sima Guang hit the tank Once Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When they were playing， one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to cry， running for help. However， Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the water tank. “Bang！” The tank broke and the water ran out. The child was saved. Do you like the story？ What do you think of Sima Guang？ 同学们一定听过《守株待兔》的故事吧，根据图片和提示词，请用英语描述这个故事。 注意：不少于80词。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：hare野兔；hurriedly匆忙地；knock against撞上；lazy懒惰的；tree stump树桩 Once upon a time， 　there was a farmer working in his fields. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot. He was cool under the tree.　 there was a farmer working in his fields. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot. He was cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer， it was very afraid. It ran so hurriedly that its head knocked against a tree stump. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it. He picked up the dead hare and t