内容正文:
Unit 1 Past and present
单元话题满分范文必背
1.上周五,你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论.请根据讨论内容,以Past and present为题写一篇短文.
注意事项:
1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥;语句通顺,上下文连贯;
2. 词数80个左右,作文开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Past and present
Last Friday, we had a discussion about life’s changes in the past and at present. Here are some of the changes.
In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in our city. But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. Now the government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground. Most families have their own cars.
Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:题干中给出了写作方向,考生应从交通、环境、生活等方面对比过去与现在的变化,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍上周五针对“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了讨论;
第二步,具体从交通、生活及交通等方面介绍变化;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① have a discussion 进行讨论
② in the past 在过去
③ on foot 步行
④ by bicycle 骑自行车
[高分句型]
① But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides.(with的复合结构)
② In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground.(but连接的并列句)
2.近年来,人们的生活发生了许多变化。请根据下表提供的信息以“Great changes in our life”为主题写一篇短文来阐述人们生活中的变化以及人们对未来生活的憧憬。
Communication(通讯)
Living condition (居住)
Transportation (交通)
In the past
write letters
use public phones
houses made of wood