2024年中职复习中职英语作文专题复习课件

英语作文评分标准 一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。 二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。 四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。 六档0分 空白 Big mistake指： 单词、句子结构、谓语构成、语 序、语态、时态等方面； Little mistake指： 名词单复数、第三人称单数、 拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。 Alice is my a best friend, she come from Canada. she is very tall, hair is very long,he like sports. but I don‘t know if does she like swim? She likes chinese,and she do well in it,we all very like she. 去掉 comes She her she likes 去掉 likes swimming Chinese does 去掉 her very much For example 1.句型、结构 --- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。 We all very like her. We all like her very much.√ He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. √ 避免方法： 多记短语和句型 He walks to school. 人称一致: Alice is my best friend, he likes sports. 时态: He has gone to Guilin yesterday. 主谓一致: This pair of shoes are mine. The shoes are new. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English. √ she 去掉 is with 2.注意语法项目 3. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句，倒装句) I don‘t know if does she like swimming。 she likes swimming What a nice student is she! she is! She is a student, so I am. so am I 4、注意：重短轻长, 就易避难。 以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。 2. Mr. Tang is the teacher which I like best. 1.I have a friend is called Li Ming. 去掉 I have a friend，he is called Li Ming. Mr. Tang is a teacher, I like him best. Let’s practice! 常见错误改正： 1.We at school from Monday to Friday We are at school from Monday to Friday. 2.There are some grass or flowers beside the road. There is some grass and flowers beside the road 3.I think go to school by bus is the best way. I think going to school by bus is the best way. 4. They don’t know how to do. They don’t know what to do it. They don’t know how to do it. They don’t know what to do . 5.They