专题五 写作主题四 活动邀请-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（新教材）

高考专题辅导与测试·英语 写作主题四 活动邀请 试一试 —查找失分短板 2.时间表述存在误差 [题目] ①出现语法错误：如at9 am on the next Sunday (2022·新高考I卷)假定你是校广播站英语 (当时间名词前有this,that,last,next,every, 节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教 each等词修饰时，其前通常不用任何介词)。 Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 写出上面时问短语的正确表达： 1.节目介绍： 2.访谈的时间和话题 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： ②表达方式不恰当：出于礼貌，邀请人需要与被邀 2.请按如下格式作答。 请人协商一下时间是否方便，有些考生可能会 Dear Caroline, 忽略这一点，往往采用过于直白或命令式邀 请，如 Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome.(看上去很委婉，其实直接单方固定 了邀的的时间，不属于礼貌交际。)》 尝试委蜿表达：Would you tell me if you are available then? 3.要点陈述过于宽泛 本文的要点包含节日介绍与访谈话题，节目 的内容介绍可以宽泛一些，但访谈的话题要具体， 并且要具有可操作性。如： 宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested in. 具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students'communication skills Yours sincerely, in English. Li Hua 醒一醒—常见失分探因 记一记—常用写作范式 1,开头不够简洁明了 Dear 本邀请信的开头应开门见山介绍李华，并简 Knowing that you're interested in/fond of/keen 单说明写信的目的。部分考生常常会介绍或说明 on (感兴趣或喜欢的事物)，I'm writing 的过于详细，出现无效语言，千扰了行文逻辑，如： I'd like to invite you to join in (活动). I am Li Hua in charge of the English program As scheduled,it will be held "Talk and Talk"at our school broadcasting station. (具体地点、时间)，when there will be Our school broadcasting station is well received (主要内客).Furthermore/In addition, among the students,enriching our school life.I'm (进一步的安排)，after which we will writing to invite you to attend our program. 找出上面语段中的无效语言： (另一个安排)，I'm sure/certain/convinced you can not only (活动益处之一)but also (活动蓝处之二)through the activity.(介绍活动内客和活动益处) 72 专题五基础写作 I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your [结尾常用语] participation at your earliest convenience./ DWe would be honored by your attendance. Hopefully,you'll accept my invitation if it is 2All of us are looking forward to your participation. convenient to you..(表达希望对方接受邀请的愿望) Your presence is highly appreciated. Yours. DWhatever your decision is,please let me know. Li Hua 5I'm looking forward to receiving your earliest 背一背一高分靓点表达 reply! [开头常用语] DI'm Li Hua,who is ..It is my great honor to 悟一悟—高考满分佳作 invite