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读后续写“四步”写作法
“聚焦创新素养培养的新高考读写课堂逆向设计与实践研究”专项课题成果
4steps
Read for 4W(who, when, where, what)
1 /
Read For PETS(personality, emotion, theme, suspense and foreshadowing)
2 /
Predict&Plot
3 /
Draft&Polish
4 /
读后续写的“四步”指的是:
1.获取文章大意及记叙文要素(Read for 4W---who, when, where, what)
2.二次阅读获取人物个性、情感变化、文章主题、情节铺垫与悬念(Read For PETS ----personality, emotion, theme, suspense and foreshadowing)
3.情节预测与构思(Predict&Plot)
4.打草与打磨(Draft&Polish)
“四步”写作法的内涵
(德州•期中考试2023.11)It was a beautiful sunny morning in early summer, when the world seemed full of sunlight and new green leaves. I was in a good mood as my parents had just given me $300 for my daily expenses during the week that they would be away in Mexico to visit my mother’s sick grandfather. I was extremely overjoyed, thinking hard about the things I could do with the money. If I survived on bread and butter the whole week, I would have an unexpected windfall of $200 to buy the latest Kobe Bryant basketball shoes! What a terrific idea!
As usual, the physical education class was thrilling. I felt most at ease on the basketball court. After playing several fierce games, I could hardly catch my breath as I headed back towards the classroom, sweaty and exhausted.When I entered, I found my classmates gathered around Steven's desk as he searched through his books and some other personal items anxiously. Steven had always been popular. Not only was he intelligent and well-mannered, but he also came from a well-off family. And he shared everything he had with us.
Right away, I learned Steven had lost the money he would donate to a children's welfare institute that afternoon.Then I informed Miss. Jones, the class teacher. She rushed over immediately and organized a search around the classroom.We stood by our desks and emptied the contents of our schoolbags onto the desk for inspection.
It was my turn.As Miss Jones took out the $300 from my wallet, the class fell into a shock. I didn't know the amount lost was exactly $300 un