专题五 第9讲 “现象与观点”主题写作-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（老教材）

高考专题辅导与测试·英语 第9讲 “现象与观点”主题写作 试一试 查找失分短板 3.结尾部分语言缺乏号召力 题目] 有些考生在结尾发出倡议时，经常采用空喊 (2022·全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海 口号的方式，缺乏号召力，如：I,et's protect oceans 洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短 ow!为避免因此失分，考生可以在简单发出呼吁 文投稿。内容包括： 之后，进而强调行动的意义。请补全以下尾段： 1.海洋的重要性： It's high time we took action. 2.保护海洋的倡议。 can we protect and restore our precious oceans. [自主写作] Our Oceans,Our Responsibility 记一记 常用写作范式 June 8th was officially named by the UN in Dear 2009 as World Oceans Day. In recent years,we have to face the problem (社会现象).As we all know, (现象的危客性).In order to it is high time that (侣议及倡议的目的). Firstly, (倍议措施一. Secondly. (倡议措施二). What's more.we should (倡议措施三). Last but not least,it is a good idea (其他注意事项或侣议措施)， (简要总结侣议措施的好处)， so let's (倡议者的决心和希望). Students'Union 背一背 高分靓点表达 [开头常用语] D...was officially named by...as... 醒一醒—常见失分探因 2It aims to raise people's awareness of... 1.写作内容与所给首句不衔接 A number of factors account for the phenomenon. 部分考生容易起笔就写“海洋的重要性”，忽 1With the learning task increasing in high school, 略了首句后面要架构一个承上启下的句式，把海 more and more high school students are beginning 洋日和海洋的重要性衔接起来。 t0. 2.对海洋重要性的叙述观点化 5 Recently we did a survey about whether... 考生在写作时，常常会忽略通过叙述海洋的 should...or not. 客观情况来说明海洋的重要性，而是习惯通过发 6Hearing that you are ...I am more than 表自己的观点来列举海洋的重要性，这样文字的 delighted to share my views. 说服力就弱化了许多，因此考生要分清事实与观 These days,...is not uncommon,causing... 点类语言各自的作用。请区分以下叙述属于事实： 8The theme of ..has gone viral on and off line (F)还是观点(O): since .. DThe oceans can regulate the climate and make it [主体常用语] livable for humans. ( DAnother reason is that...,not because...,but 2The ocean is to our life like the heart is to us. because,·. () 2When it comes to ...the answer must be... 104 专题五书面表达 3It can also allow for creative and critical thinking. 2.学语法结构 It is through...that...will bring out the best 本文语法结构覆盖较全，如：非限制性定语从 in us. 句which are vital to,,；非谓语动词作状语 5Although it is....I believe it will... Covering about71%.:结果状语从句so On the one hand,...;on the other hand,... important that,.;虚拟语气It's high time we As a result