专题三 应用文写作对对碰(三)（课件PPT）-【新高考方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题增分方略（新教材）

对对碰(三)　感谢信 道歉信 应用文 写作 目录 一、“感谢信”写作增分指导 二、“道歉信”写作增分指导 2 “感谢信”写作增分指导 一、 [写作题目] (2019·浙江6月高考)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢；　2.回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3．临别祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Dear Alex， I'm sorry to hear that you will return to your country very soon and I'm writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm-hearted help with my English learning. I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. Besides, you selflessly shared your learning experience with me. Actually, without your help, I would not have made rapid progress in English and would not have won the recent English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you. I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! Yours， Li Hua 学亮点写法 1．学亮丽开头 开头先用I'm sorry to hear that ...点明写信的背景及对朋友的不舍之情。接着用extend my sincere gratitude for your warm-hearted help点明写信的目的，感情真挚、诚恳， 语言自然流畅。 2．学高级表达 (1)使用高级词块，如：extend one's sincere gratitude for, devote ... to ..., make rapid progress, all in all, words fail to express等。 (2)准确运用高级句式，如：what引导的宾语从句what you have devoted to ...；含蓄虚拟语气without your help, I would not have made ...and would not have won ...；助动词do表示强调I do hope that you will have ...等。这些都为文章增色添彩，提升了档次。 3．学精彩结尾 结尾用助动词do放在谓语动词hope前特意加强语气，充分表达了对朋友Alex的美好祝愿。 4．学行文逻辑 首段中的and，主体段中的still，Besides, Actually, All in all, 尾段中的and串联起了句与句之间、段与段之间的衔接过渡，使得全文内容表达清楚，逻辑合理。 [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：表达感谢之情并说明原因 1．I am writing this letter to thank you for ... 2．I am writing to express my sincere thanks for ... 3．I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help in this letter. 4．On behalf of ..., I'd like to extend my sincere gratitude for your selfless help. 5．I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during ... Ⅱ.主体部分：对对方给予的帮助以及达到的作用和效果进行有层次的描述和赞扬 1．It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to ... 2．Thank you very much for your kind ho